Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Blaze is an amazing actress and Mr. Clearwater is an amazing creep. I know he's a footnote to this story ,but I would love to see what type of personal and professional trouble Lorna will get him into. She doesn't seem to be a big fan of men, especially Mr.Clearwater's type.

The last paragraph is gripping and it dares the reader to come back for more. Always leave on a high note and this chapter does that.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014

Thank you so much. I appreciated your comments. :)

You will find out what Lorna has in mind for him today.... I hope!

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Why are all the creepy doctors affiliated with mental institutions? Blaze's job description carries many duties; most of them unpleasant! Good chapter, Phyllis.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, Marietta. :) By the way, Clearwater's not a doctor; he's the hospital administrator.

reply by Green Lake Girl on 17-Nov-2014

That's right; sorry. Nonetheless a tool!

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I'm obviously coming in rather late,
but will pick up as I go along --
seems an intriguing story.

most interest, Phyllis.

Margaret

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thank you for taking a look, Margaret. You missed my last book, DEMON, where Ginger (now permanently, with God's approval, using the body of Tara) found love with a human, which led her eventually to repent. She was forgiven by God and married Gary.

Blaze, her friend from demon days in Hell, stars in this final book of the trilogy. Unlike Ginger, she is fully to blame for joining Lucifer in his rebellion against God, so she is not redeemable. But her story will take a turn and she, too, will end up fighting against Luke's evil plans, even tho she is now a new Earth agent taking Ginger's place, after being only his secretary for hundreds of years and never once accepting his advances. Until the other day, that is...

Luke is upset with her because she no longer wants sex with him, but she only gave in to him for a few days while he was using Sen. Blake's body. When he showed up later in a new one, she wanted no part of him and told him so. As revenge, he's given her a nearly impossible assignment--to get the senator out of the mental hospital for disrupting Ginger/Tara's wedding to Gary (which was really done by Lucifer in possession of the senator's body) and, harder yet, with the senator's reputation intact so that he can win re-election next week.

Lorna, his savvy but unethical lawyer, has a plan, and it takes two people, so Blaze is working with her.

Confusing, I know. Don't feel obligated to read if it's not your cup of tea. :)

reply by Margaret Snowdon on 16-Nov-2014

sounds intriguing - thanks for expalaining. I'll review when I can - I've three other books I want to edit but am in no rush. The trouble is when they've been hanging around for so long, it's hard to remember the characters. But I'll get there in time. M

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Very nice chapter that is very well written. The dialog is clear and direct.

Unless I missed it, I don't know how Clearwater knew her name was Blaze as she didn't introduce herself. However, he called her by name.

Thanks! Good job.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Oh, he did? I must fix that at once. Thanks so much! :)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The appears to have worked but I have a feeling Blaze will not stand for being kissed so Lorna better hurry and call or things could get bad. I can't wait to find out.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Barbara. I ended up sleeping most of the day, so the next post will be tomorrow, Sunday.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Ah, I get it now. The doctor is still going to think Blake is crazy, but he's going to have to do as he's told. He's another creep who deserves whatever he gets. Hope his wife finds out. I can imagine what the senator is thinking, waking up in a straight jacket with no memory of how it happened. He probably thinks he's actually crazy. He'll probably blame it on his opponants. They drugged him or something.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thanks, Cindy. And you just figured out Lorna's plan to save him. New chapter tomorrow. :)

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

It is difficult to write when one is busy and to me, at least, I lose the flow. That is why I haven't started back on my novel. It is useless unless your mind is living it. Well done, here, Phyllis. Take care now!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Drew. You are correct, for sure. I was hoping to post a new chapter Saturday, but weekends here are way too busy. I do hope to get back to daily come Monday, and one Sunday (tomorrow) I'm almost certain. :)

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

I think the Clearwater administrator may need a tic tac. Then again, Blaze can just burn that bad taste out of her mouth. After her performance, I'm surprised that her fictional dad was not awarded a suite with a jacuzzi .

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

LOL! Thanks a bunch for this fun review, Ed. :)

Comment from forestport12

Excellent

As always you prove the simplicity of powered and precised verbs ignite the imagination like nothing else, inviting me in particular to a world that is filled with depth of character. "A simple word like, "He leered," is powerful yet effective.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thank you so verrrry much, Stan. I really appreciate these comments. :)

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

I was so happy to not be three chapters behind!!! Yea. Lorna is just deliciously evil. Ha! More so than Blaze, might even rival Luke and with brains! I can't wait to see what she is up to in his files. I'm actually caught up on SOMETHING here. Great chapter. mikey

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thanks, Mikey. I slowed down just so you could keep up. Hehe. Amanda and I had another fun day shopping Friday, so the next chapter will be today, Saturday. :)

reply by michaelcahill on 15-Nov-2014

The thought of the two of you shopping is very smile inducing! Tell her to write something. :))