Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

Subtle ethereal
exchanges
through the cosmos,
always alive within us.

Very nice, when a love is true, it becomes eternal, no horizon fixed for it, no distance factors, only the minds attached to fly together, to come together.

Fantastic imageries, your power is so strong that you keep your love's bodiless soul with you like you keep your breath with you.

I liked this poem like anything, Keep going.

ch

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from clhutchinson

Excellent

Love the thoughts and images that presents this theme so clearly and with tender and deep awareness of the inner spirits shared whether together or apart. Great flow and a great piece.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from Aleksandramarie

Excellent

this is totally dellicious,

the flow is superb and just slides from one gloriaus image to the next,

it is a thrill to sit and just let this wash over
you, and soothe so...

thanks,mspotter

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from AuroraSky

Excellent

So very apt...and so many underestimate the power of the ethereal subtleties. Nicely shared Pili.

'Subtle
ethereal
exchanges
through
the cosmos,
always alive
within us.'

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

you have a style all of your own
and that is a very good thing
this is another very well written piece
this was a pleasure to read and review... John

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from Always_Hope

Excellent

It is to feel lighter
after grieving
your absence,
sensing
a strong pull of love

This is refreshing and simply sweet.


through
the cosmos,
always alive
within us. <--loves these ending lines.

Don't dare change a thing! :)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from Black Wren

Excellent

Another wonderfully written poem filled with splendid images and beautiful descriptions.
I love these poems you dedicate to furface!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from Lisloh

Excellent

WHEW ~~ DEEP BREATH

Alrighty then.
I could take this two different ways; one, totally spiritual and it's God you are referring to being at one with, or, two, a soul-mate has passed on and you connect spiritually.

It is the silent
acknowledgment
that we share,
when
you are me
and I am you.

and then >>

Subtle
ethereal
exchanges
through
the cosmos,
always alive
within us.

This is one awesome write my Friend.
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh

No nits. Awesome write.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from suneagle

Excellent

A fascinating poem, Pili. It is alive and vibrant with the spiritual energy you espouse.

"you are joy." (I suggest single quote marks: 'you are joy.' Double quote marks are usually reserved for direct speech.)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005

Comment from Sarlou

Excellent

This had me truly enveloped and intrigued and interested right until the end. Your words and descriptions are colourful and visual and full of emotion and love.
I don't see any improvements to be made!
Sarlou xx

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2005