From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Spiritual experience."Mostly romance.
28 total reviews
Comment from tyjema
If I had to use three words to describe this, they would be: sweet, romantic, and smooth. This is a very nice poem.
your
gentle smile
you are me
and I am you
the warmth
of your breath
caresses
my skin
Thanks for sharing.
The grace of the Lord Jesus Christ and the love of God and the fellowship of the Holy Spirit be with you, Amen.
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If I had to use three words to describe this, they would be: sweet, romantic, and smooth. This is a very nice poem.
your
gentle smile
you are me
and I am you
the warmth
of your breath
caresses
my skin
Thanks for sharing.
The grace of the Lord Jesus Christ and the love of God and the fellowship of the Holy Spirit be with you, Amen.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2005
Comment from Permelia
This has beautiful imagery
It flows so very smoothly
The style is perfect
Form is uniquely your own
The alliteration is sprinkled throughout the poem
This all reflects a poem written from your heart.
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This has beautiful imagery
It flows so very smoothly
The style is perfect
Form is uniquely your own
The alliteration is sprinkled throughout the poem
This all reflects a poem written from your heart.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from K Ames
Another nice piece that seemed to flow very well as I read it. I didn't see anything awry with it and I could easily see it being published somewhere. Thanks for sharing it.
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Another nice piece that seemed to flow very well as I read it. I didn't see anything awry with it and I could easily see it being published somewhere. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from Bryana
Hi dear Pili. Excellent imagery! You grieve the absence of
a bodyless soul! An angel maybe? That spiritual experience
you see in nature as the reflections of the skies over the water.
This was a beautiful poem for Sunday morning.
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Hi dear Pili. Excellent imagery! You grieve the absence of
a bodyless soul! An angel maybe? That spiritual experience
you see in nature as the reflections of the skies over the water.
This was a beautiful poem for Sunday morning.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from ladykay
Hi Pili...
"Subtle
ethereal
exchanges
through
the cosmos,
always alive
within us."
Pili...there is something about this ethereal thing that gets to one...I dont know what it is! I love the way you write this and the way it ends up on reading.
I liked your form and style and that's all I can say in about the way its written. I love the way its written.
ladykay
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Hi Pili...
"Subtle
ethereal
exchanges
through
the cosmos,
always alive
within us."
Pili...there is something about this ethereal thing that gets to one...I dont know what it is! I love the way you write this and the way it ends up on reading.
I liked your form and style and that's all I can say in about the way its written. I love the way its written.
ladykay
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from Seancuig
Very sublte Pili.
Little snippets of alliteration well woven in. This plays nicely on the senses and reflects the spiritual nature very well.
Nice job
Sean
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Very sublte Pili.
Little snippets of alliteration well woven in. This plays nicely on the senses and reflects the spiritual nature very well.
Nice job
Sean
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from Jewell McChesney
It is the silent
acknowledgment
that we share,
when
you are me
and I am you.
Ahh yes, a lovely moment!
Thanks for this one.
I totally relate.
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It is the silent
acknowledgment
that we share,
when
you are me
and I am you.
Ahh yes, a lovely moment!
Thanks for this one.
I totally relate.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from LunarSecret
There is an undercurrent of sadness running through this poem that is almost tangible.
A well constructed poem that is aesthetically pleasing as well as flowing well.
Well done and take care
Lunar
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There is an undercurrent of sadness running through this poem that is almost tangible.
A well constructed poem that is aesthetically pleasing as well as flowing well.
Well done and take care
Lunar
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from Mrs Jones
that create
crystalline
Just suggestions Pili = creating
the warmth
of your breath
caress = caressing or caresses
my skin
with a soft
Nice flow to the verse.
Well done
Rose
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that create
crystalline
Just suggestions Pili = creating
the warmth
of your breath
caress = caressing or caresses
my skin
with a soft
Nice flow to the verse.
Well done
Rose
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a lovely, spiritual poem Pili and the artwork you have chosen is absolutely stunning. You have used some wonderful imagery within this poem and it conveys an air of peace and tranquility to the reader. Well done.
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This is a lovely, spiritual poem Pili and the artwork you have chosen is absolutely stunning. You have used some wonderful imagery within this poem and it conveys an air of peace and tranquility to the reader. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2005
