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The Virus

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Changing the world's attitudes

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Comment from jim lawler
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A very interesting read. i enjoyed it. you did a very good job with your presentation. and it was clear and concise. I didn't spot any typos and it needs no revision. You have a vivid imagination. Good luck with it! Jim

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    I appreciate the encouraging words and review. Thanks...John
Comment from c_lucas
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One of your arguments strikes very close to home. Humans tend to think they are the only intelligent life in the universe. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Thank you Charlie...John
reply by c_lucas on 19-Nov-2014
    You're welcome, John. Charlie
Comment from djsaxon
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Strong, well constructed speeches from the protagonists and definitive philosophy. Maybe you cover a little too much ground in the space of the chapter, but it certainly keeps the ball in the air.
"Give us an example," Betty asks.
"Why are you doing this?" asks Roy.

Both valid responses, but they tell us nothing about the characters. Cheers - DJ

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    My first effort at fiction. You give me hope. I have to use the author notes more, both in this chapter and the previous five. Roy an Betty are central, but need more meat on their bones. Thanks for your kind words...John