Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Average

Hello. Sorry but I didnt understand neither the gist nor the plot. Im lost with the relationship between jack and jill vis a vis bonny and clyde. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

jack and jill a nursery rhyme about young children, the streets, they jump rope to that rhyme while becoming the criminals bonnie and clye to eat and sleep in their neighborhood, a hard place to live and a harder one to escape from, the fathers often pay with dollars or quilt, some with their life, Walt

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Hey, Walter, I wrote a longish review of this poem, hit the save button and got one of those unable to submit with all kinds of techie symbols on it.

It gobbled up my review. There was nothing profound in it. I just told you I was not fully understanding it, but enjoyed the images and references.

I want to see if this allows me to save.

See you on the other side.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Always, thank u, jack and jill a nursery rhyme about young children, the streets, they jump rope to that rhyme while becoming the criminals bonnie and clye to eat and sleep in their neighborhood, a hard place to live and a harder one to escape from, the fathers often pay with dollars or quilt, some with their life, Walt

reply by Jay Squires on 15-Nov-2014

Thank you, Walt. But if you made them all this easily explained, they wouldn't be poetry!

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Interesting art work and words written .
Love and caring are essential words within our lives.
When love is scarce many things can go wrong within our lives.

Great to read.

honeytree

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2014