Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Exceptional

oh it is a good thing I just got my 6's repleanished. You get the first and this was an excellent piece . Written well and a wonderful twist at the end as only you can do.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014

Thanks Barb for the generous rating. Glad you like this! R

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Well, this is certainly a different form of horror, but sometimes human horrors are the best. I commend you on your skill in delivering a well thought out and complete tale. It had me from start to finish and ended in full circle. I see a winner here.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thank you very much lancellot for the review and the good wish. I'm indebted to you! R

reply by lancellot on 15-Nov-2014

No, I thank you. It was the best read of the day.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Well planned and developed story. I seldom read horror stories but you held my attention to the end. A lot of pain blood and death

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thank you very much emrpoems. Glad you like this! R

Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

One reads this quickly and to the end to find out what was in the parcel. Surprise, you never say. Good one. Good flow, good descriptions, even for the American reader.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014

Thanks granny goes viral. I've just added a Postscript to reveal the contents of the parcel. Hope it's to your liking! R