Andrea's Ghost
An acrostic contest entry86 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Magnificent presentation - is this Photoshop or some other software you are using?
Your ghostly tale brings to life some of the fears and superstitions of many small tons. You have made the vengeful Andrea terrifying indeed.
'sinisterly' is a very awkward adverb - not sure I've ever seen it used....
Steve
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Magnificent presentation - is this Photoshop or some other software you are using?
Your ghostly tale brings to life some of the fears and superstitions of many small tons. You have made the vengeful Andrea terrifying indeed.
'sinisterly' is a very awkward adverb - not sure I've ever seen it used....
Steve
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from giraffmang
Absolutely awesome!
That's all I really want to say so the rest is just filler. You did it again. First of the year and I'm giving my first six.
Gareth
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Absolutely awesome!
That's all I really want to say so the rest is just filler. You did it again. First of the year and I'm giving my first six.
Gareth
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from robina1978
Beautiful artwork to complement your poem in Acrostic form with rhyme. That is very good and the subject is original. Best wishes for the contest. This must be a strong contender.
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Beautiful artwork to complement your poem in Acrostic form with rhyme. That is very good and the subject is original. Best wishes for the contest. This must be a strong contender.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from ravim
BHAAAAA...
That was just to shock you!
A great shocking song to begin the new year. In your Acrostic gallery. Terrible atmosphere, grand imagery, good rhyme, should I say more? Tumbling into Hell's pit where she hides their souls - looks better to me.
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BHAAAAA...
That was just to shock you!
A great shocking song to begin the new year. In your Acrostic gallery. Terrible atmosphere, grand imagery, good rhyme, should I say more? Tumbling into Hell's pit where she hides their souls - looks better to me.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Dean. Great job on this haunting little piece mate, from the master of horror. I loved your author notes as well. I was shocked to see my rank had disappeared this morning but then I checked your profile and yours is gone also. I have been using you as a yard stick. Do they do this every year? Cheers and well done, Fez
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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G'day Dean. Great job on this haunting little piece mate, from the master of horror. I loved your author notes as well. I was shocked to see my rank had disappeared this morning but then I checked your profile and yours is gone also. I have been using you as a yard stick. Do they do this every year? Cheers and well done, Fez
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Fez. I believe this is the first year ever where everyone's rating is wiped clean, and we all start on an even playing field. That is fine by me. I think it is only fair. After all, you are only as good as your last post, right?
Thanks again for the generous rating and kind comments.
~Cheers, mate! ~Dean
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When I seen the zero rank I nearly passed out, because I have been working at reviewing for maybe 12 hours per day for 3 weeks. Before my year off from fs i was ranked #27 and I managed to get to 220 in 3 weeks this time. But then I thought about it...WOOHOO! Bring it on mate! Look out Dean here I come Hahahahaha!
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Hah, you're most probably right, Fez. With my first book being published this late summer or early fall, I doubt I'll have the time to dedicate to the site like I did this year. I will try my best, though, you can bet your money on that, mate. :) LOL...
Comment from Domino 2
Newtown sounds a creepy place, Deano - maybe you should move there, not that you need the inspiration. ;-)
With respect, the meter is all over the place here, and subsequently I had to keep stopping and reading lines again.
Mind you, I'm sure I'm in the minority of the meter-obsessed in rhyme/structured poetry on site, and as this is such a clever acrostic anyway, I forgive you. LOL. :-)
Since death, Andrea has proved she is basically a kind soul who wouldn't dream of reprisals. Yer right.
Nice one, my friend.
Cheers, Ray
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Newtown sounds a creepy place, Deano - maybe you should move there, not that you need the inspiration. ;-)
With respect, the meter is all over the place here, and subsequently I had to keep stopping and reading lines again.
Mind you, I'm sure I'm in the minority of the meter-obsessed in rhyme/structured poetry on site, and as this is such a clever acrostic anyway, I forgive you. LOL. :-)
Since death, Andrea has proved she is basically a kind soul who wouldn't dream of reprisals. Yer right.
Nice one, my friend.
Cheers, Ray
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Thank you very much, Ray. I really appreciate your comments and review. And thanks for the forgiveness. I could use a little, LOL...
~Dean
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Hahaha - couldn't we ALL, Deano, though quite a few still think their own shit don't stink.
Ray
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Hah, yeah, I think you're right about that, my friend. My shit smells really, really bad! Heh-heh... ;)
