Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Brooke, what a happy poem...made me laugh...this reminds me of my grandkids...when we took them to chucky cheese...LOL ...I love your poem and the picture of Sawyer...wonderful...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 09-Nov-2014

you are so welcome...have a great day...Luff

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

Love this inner rhyme..reminds me of rapping for some reason. A line with alliteration and consonance both a visible and audible treat. Can't cap the laughter.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014

Dallas, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

That innocent little face on your homepage would launch 1000 ships, Brooke! And what a delightful poem and what a joy to read, his little face looking out through the gaps. I loved it, Giddy

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014

Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Another Sawyer poem and I love every line of it. What else shall I say, I have nothing to comment on, because you are an excellent poet, and your poems carry a unique adewpearl stamp. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014

nassus, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Just pure fun poem , love the pictures Miranda took of Sawyer
You couldn't resist to get inspired with such model. Great images
in every stanza. Thank you. Pili

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Pili :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 08-Nov-2014

You are so welcome, love to see Sawyer. ;:--)). Pili

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Brooke,

What an awesome choice of pix! Sawyer looks as if he's having a ball. This is the sort of pix that is magazine worthy, Grandma!

Great job bringing out the best with this fun poem.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Jax, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I remember my Grandson at about the same age that Sawyer is now doing the same thing:) Wonderfully fun poem Brooke:)
Teresa

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thank you, Teresa, for your positive comments. Did you mean the 4 rating? Brooke

reply by TAB_that's me on 08-Nov-2014

Of course not Brooke. I'm so sorry. I changed it:)

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014

The change didn't register :-)

reply by TAB_that's me on 09-Nov-2014

I just tried again. I hope it holds.

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014

thanks :-)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem that made me smile as I read it, sawyer looks so sweet with his laughing smile.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

thanks so much, sweetwoodjax :-) B rooke

Comment from Cajungirl

Exceptional

Another exceptional poem, Brooke. I felt my smile grow as I read your poem by the time I finished I was much like Sawyer, laughing. Brilliant work.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

cajungirl, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

reply by Cajungirl on 08-Nov-2014

You are most welcome.

Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

Love your poem, Brooke, and your handsome little feller is just so irresistible! It sure looks like he is having fun in the ball pit! And a good poem to go along with it!!!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Linda, thanks so much. The ball pit is his favorite part of his weekly class at My Gym. :-) Brooke