Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is so cute, You are right, once a laugh starts it can't be stifled. You have chosen delightful descriptive words here. It was so enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, RYME4U :-) Brooke

Comment from Genya

Excellent

Can just hear this little guys laugh. It was so contagious. A child trying to stop a laugh can be one of the hardest things to do. What a great poem. Lovely pictures as well. Once it started down its path not one thing could stop my laugh. Just brilliant. Genya

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Genya, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Lol what a delightful piece of poetry Brooke. Yes once we get the urge to laugh we cannot stop it. You have described that feeling well.
I didn't stand a chance against it,
couldn't trap or cage or fence it.
Once it started down its path,
not one thing could stop my laugh.
Lovely!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Wendyanne, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Brooke - Very good - you had me fooled. All the way through this great little poem in good rhyming couplets, I thought you were talking about balloons. But it is Sawyers laugh you write about. I can remember laughing uncontrollably like that, but not for a while. A really good hop-along poem. Warm regards Dorothy x

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Dorothy - I love it when he has a giggle fit and just can't stop :-) Brooke

reply by Dorothy Farrell on 08-Nov-2014

Hi Brooke - A child's laughter is infectious. If you go on Youtube you get babies laughing and it is impossible not to laugh also. Regards Dorothy

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

Haha. Lol. This is a delightful piece of poetic art! Ending with a smile as I smile in the ending. Nice one dear Brooke!
Thank you for sharing!
Rebekka x

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014

Rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke