Comment from misscookie

Excellent

O)h. I thought that was so sweet.
It must be love for your husband to let you cut his hair.
I enjoyed read your write as always.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Thank you miss cookie for the kind review. It was a fun piece to write.

reply by misscookie on 10-Nov-2014

You're very welcome. have a blessed day.
Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good story well done. Can't keep reviewing these gotta do some of my own stuff. Might come through next time and just read if that is ok.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

That is fine, I know you have things you must do. Thanks for the reviews of my work.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat,

Loving all your family photos and stories. I had to chuckle about the haircut. I've cut Tom's hair for years, as well as my own. Now he has long, long hair now, so I just trim his neck and sideburns.

I always tease him about getting paid. Heartwarming story.

Cheers & Blessing
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

This is my favorite fiction story I have ever written. People in my writing class which I did this story for didn't like the story, but the instructor thought it was quite good and told the class it was good.

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Ha! Very cute scenario with the wife cutting her husbands hair. The dialogue is realistic and enjoyable from start to finish.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Thanks, this is one of my very favorite fiction writings I have ever done.

Comment from Genya

Excellent

What a great photo Pat to go with the Barbers Payoff. Wouldn't dare try to cut my husbands hair...poor lamb, not got much left now. Loved the story. Very visual and humorous in places. For the prices you charge, shame I don't live nearer. Really enjoyed this. Great ending. Genya

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Thanks for the review.
I would charge more now for a hair cut, because prices have gone up very much since 1990.
This is possible one of the favorite things I ever wrote. I love writing humor or stories with a moral.

Comment from Susan B. Lamphier

Excellent

Well, you two have a great relationship! Very nice, with a lot of detail and the kidding of a long-term marriage. I had a giggle at the end, as I read about the male character's point of view. Perfectly captured. I wondered--was your writing assignment to take the view of another character, written from his point of view? Success! Very well done!

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Thanks for the review. The assignment was just to tell a story of a hair-cut. It didn't matter whose point of view it was, so I chose to write it from my husbands point of view. I have a bit of a comic in me so the ending was fun to write.