Ten Worms Emerged
a counting poem for children141 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
This one made me giggle. Those poor worms! And the bird in the picture looks like he enjoyed more than one. A worm's life is sure is tough and short! Evi
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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This one made me giggle. Those poor worms! And the bird in the picture looks like he enjoyed more than one. A worm's life is sure is tough and short! Evi
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Evi, for your thoughtful and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from Wendyanne
Oh dear, poor worms! This is a delightful but sad piece of poetry Brooke. I truly believe you could write a poem about anything!! Well done as always.
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Oh dear, poor worms! This is a delightful but sad piece of poetry Brooke. I truly believe you could write a poem about anything!! Well done as always.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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thank you so much, my gracious friend :-) Brooke
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Another fine counting poem. I am always impressed at the ways you find to do in the hapless subjects. Of course two actually escaped, but I bet that Robin will be back - early. Thanks for the morning smile. - Wendy
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Another fine counting poem. I am always impressed at the ways you find to do in the hapless subjects. Of course two actually escaped, but I bet that Robin will be back - early. Thanks for the morning smile. - Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Wendy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from emrpoems
Excellent counting poem for children.
Good use of abcb rhymes in you 8/6/8/6 quatrains.
Some lessons could be learnt from these words too. Always pay attention to your surroundings
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Excellent counting poem for children.
Good use of abcb rhymes in you 8/6/8/6 quatrains.
Some lessons could be learnt from these words too. Always pay attention to your surroundings
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from linsbm
This is a very educational poem where children would be able to know in Mathematics - subtraction. Aside from that, children learn and adults too, behavior of worms in any weather situations - very visual in each . So perfect in the write of your presentation, the rhyming, rhythm and flow are all perfect. I know children would love to read his poem, and to me too. Thanks so much for sharing.} Lin
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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This is a very educational poem where children would be able to know in Mathematics - subtraction. Aside from that, children learn and adults too, behavior of worms in any weather situations - very visual in each . So perfect in the write of your presentation, the rhyming, rhythm and flow are all perfect. I know children would love to read his poem, and to me too. Thanks so much for sharing.} Lin
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Lin, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Brooke - this is very clever and well written. Poor worms - you are cruel LOL. I don't know how you keep thinking of these number poems. Perfect abab rhyme scheme, and very imaginative demise of the worms. Children will love this, as I did. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Brooke - this is very clever and well written. Poor worms - you are cruel LOL. I don't know how you keep thinking of these number poems. Perfect abab rhyme scheme, and very imaginative demise of the worms. Children will love this, as I did. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Dorothy :-) Brooke
Comment from mfowler
This counting poem will entice the kids but it does little for the confidence of worms LOL. The rhythm and rhyme work well and each story vignette is amusing and well connected to the repetitive destruction of the 10. Kids love repetition as you well know, and this modern day take on 'Ten Little Indians' should go down well with the wee ones.
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This counting poem will entice the kids but it does little for the confidence of worms LOL. The rhythm and rhyme work well and each story vignette is amusing and well connected to the repetitive destruction of the 10. Kids love repetition as you well know, and this modern day take on 'Ten Little Indians' should go down well with the wee ones.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Mark, thank you for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke
Comment from Jackarrie
I never cease to be amazed at your creative poems that your write particularly for the young children. I will be reading this to my grandchildren. I notice the worms appearing after the grass is cut, the birds have a feast.
Well written
well done
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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I never cease to be amazed at your creative poems that your write particularly for the young children. I will be reading this to my grandchildren. I notice the worms appearing after the grass is cut, the birds have a feast.
Well written
well done
Mary
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sonaleeka
I love the way words flowing from one line to other.Very deep feeling it has.Thanks for sharing.I can say I enjoyed it altogether.
God bless!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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I love the way words flowing from one line to other.Very deep feeling it has.Thanks for sharing.I can say I enjoyed it altogether.
God bless!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Sonaleeka :-) Brooke
Comment from Debra White
Hi Brooke :) So glad I'm not a worm! They are very unfortunate creatures aren't they?!
I loved your little number count down rhyme - I like that it isn't run of the mill, it has that element of realism and it not candy coated even though it's still cute and will appeal to youngsters.
Nicely done!
Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Hi Brooke :) So glad I'm not a worm! They are very unfortunate creatures aren't they?!
I loved your little number count down rhyme - I like that it isn't run of the mill, it has that element of realism and it not candy coated even though it's still cute and will appeal to youngsters.
Nicely done!
Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Debra - my kids and many others I know enjoy the realistic/dark stuff, so I'm glad you like it :-) Brooke
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My kids definitely do too! x
