I'm But a Tiny Drop of Rain
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6121 total reviews
Comment from Gargantuan2
I think you chose the perfect picture for this poem.. or was it the picture inspiring the poem? Either way they compliment each other very nicely :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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I think you chose the perfect picture for this poem.. or was it the picture inspiring the poem? Either way they compliment each other very nicely :)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Gargantuan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fabulous piece of poetic art! i love the interconnection between drop and sea! we are just tiny specs in this universe.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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this is a fabulous piece of poetic art! i love the interconnection between drop and sea! we are just tiny specs in this universe.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Aussie
How true that the raging sea begins with a tiny drop of rain to rivulets, streams, waterfalls, rivers and finally covering the parched and endless plains. Nicely presented and well written my friend. XX
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How true that the raging sea begins with a tiny drop of rain to rivulets, streams, waterfalls, rivers and finally covering the parched and endless plains. Nicely presented and well written my friend. XX
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Kay, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
I was wrong--I had one more of your posts to go! We actually had some weather on Friday like that in the picture you selected, but the weather folks are predicting 90 degrees for tomorrow--I hope Sawyer and company weren't wedded to autumn. I enjoyed your conversation between the raindrop and the sea plus the rhymed quatrains and life's lesson. Cheers- Joan
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I was wrong--I had one more of your posts to go! We actually had some weather on Friday like that in the picture you selected, but the weather folks are predicting 90 degrees for tomorrow--I hope Sawyer and company weren't wedded to autumn. I enjoyed your conversation between the raindrop and the sea plus the rhymed quatrains and life's lesson. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Joan :-) My daughter loves warm weather - even when she was little she was the only kid on her swim team to have blue lips and trembling when everyone else thought it was warm LOL :-) Brooke
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Maybe, she's like me and has low thyroid function...worth checking. -J
Comment from MissMerri
I love the intelligent philosophy expressed in this well-rhymed and rhythmic poem. Each one of us has a part to play in the big scheme of things. Each one is important to the whole. I also loved this picture. It looks like my beloved Monterey. There is nothing about this that I didn't like. It speaks to me. It is beautiful writing.
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I love the intelligent philosophy expressed in this well-rhymed and rhythmic poem. Each one of us has a part to play in the big scheme of things. Each one is important to the whole. I also loved this picture. It looks like my beloved Monterey. There is nothing about this that I didn't like. It speaks to me. It is beautiful writing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Adonna, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke;
I enjoyed this poem very much and I myself believe that the metaphorical moral to a simple band suggestive story about the little drop that could. And in this case the little dropped became the sea, "But if it weren't for you, my friend, then I would never be."
Again I enjoyed this kind of meter and tempo which reads very fluidly and where the rhyming helps with this rhythmic flow.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Brooke.
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Brooke;
I enjoyed this poem very much and I myself believe that the metaphorical moral to a simple band suggestive story about the little drop that could. And in this case the little dropped became the sea, "But if it weren't for you, my friend, then I would never be."
Again I enjoyed this kind of meter and tempo which reads very fluidly and where the rhyming helps with this rhythmic flow.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Brooke.
Alex
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so sincerely welcome
Alex
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Brooke: I truly enjoyed this lovely work of broad consciousness reaching into the endless powers of Nature. The artwork is splendid, the rhyme and pace is excellent, and the entire work is a classic! Congrats! Vance
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Dear Brooke: I truly enjoyed this lovely work of broad consciousness reaching into the endless powers of Nature. The artwork is splendid, the rhyme and pace is excellent, and the entire work is a classic! Congrats! Vance
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Vance, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
It might be tiny drops of rain, but apart from feeding the oceans, it also waters my garden :) This is very well written and very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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It might be tiny drops of rain, but apart from feeding the oceans, it also waters my garden :) This is very well written and very well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is a very honest and emotional poem. The way we see ourselves is often a far cry form how others may see us. Nice rhtyhm an th use of dialogue to tell the story was excellent. Great job on this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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This is a very honest and emotional poem. The way we see ourselves is often a far cry form how others may see us. Nice rhtyhm an th use of dialogue to tell the story was excellent. Great job on this. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Gretchen, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from JudyS
Brooke, I really enjoyed this poem. And you chose a great picture to go along with it. The ocean is such a soothing place and this poem took me back to when I lived near the sea. Great job. Judy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Brooke, I really enjoyed this poem. And you chose a great picture to go along with it. The ocean is such a soothing place and this poem took me back to when I lived near the sea. Great job. Judy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Judy, thanks so much :-) Brooke
