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I'm But a Tiny Drop of Rain

rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6

121 total reviews 
Comment from Sonaleeka
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Such a great thought wrapped in your beautiful words.
Very well written and the one I liked very much.Thanks for sharing.
God bless!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
    Sonaleeka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sanku
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'many drops make a mighty ocean'a lovely poetic presentation of this idea in the form of a dialogue between a tiny rain drop and the ocean.This also contain a moral that every small thing in this world has its place and value.great picture too.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
    Thank you, Sanku, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Brooke, love this...every drop counts...all have a place in the world...I love the wording in this one...so sweet...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
    Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Deborah Marie
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Lovely use of pboto paired with a beautifully written poem. Just love your wording and it builds upon one another... Nice compairson of "a tiny drop and the mighty sea." Keep 'em coming, Deb

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
    Thank you, Deb, for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
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Good poem with a very good message. Good words, and rhyming telling of how the little man is important for the big man to accomplish his goal.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    GWinterwin, thank you so much :- Brooke
Comment from Sasha
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This is marvelous. Yes, we are all apart of something greater. Beautifully written and reads so smoothly and the rhyme is perfect. I'm going to bed now so I'll try to catch up on my reviews tomorrow. Goodnight dear sweet poet.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Valerie, thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Dr. Nad
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It is easy to see why you are the runaway #1 poet on this site. I just love your style and ease of read. This is a simple but not simplistic axiom. "No man is an Island", "We need Each Other", "Every Little Bit Counts". I apologize for no "constructive criticism" (For me, I believe this is my favorite of your wonderful poems) I learn from you! Personal Lesson: KISS Keep It Short Stupid. (I am to wordy.)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem, Dr.Nad :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
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Wonderful and I like the message within the words. We sometimes forget how great things are built upon the foundations of the small accomplishments.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Lancellot, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
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Hello Brooke,
This was an enjoyable read about the circle of life. It certainly takes many small aspects to create the big picture. I appreciate the cleaver job you did of bringing the idea to the page.
Another solid write, my friend, well done in spirit and presentation.
Best wishes, Bill

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Benjohnsonjr
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An excellent poem with a fantastic message and insights. I love the simplicity of the words. How often we underestimate our impact and importance when we compare ourselves to others and miss the significance of our contribution. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much, Ben :-) Brooke