I'm But a Tiny Drop of Rain
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6121 total reviews
Comment from Emily George
The rhyming was smooth and flowing, much like the sea.
Such a beautiful pattern created by the alternate 8/6/8/6 quatre ins. The last two lines wrap up the sentiments of this poem nicely.
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The rhyming was smooth and flowing, much like the sea.
Such a beautiful pattern created by the alternate 8/6/8/6 quatre ins. The last two lines wrap up the sentiments of this poem nicely.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Emily George, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. This is very rhythmical and logical. I love the way you have presented this.It teaches a very wise lesson. One drop is needed to start an ocean. Very well done.
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Excellent. This is very rhythmical and logical. I love the way you have presented this.It teaches a very wise lesson. One drop is needed to start an ocean. Very well done.
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RYME4U, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from SteveY
And let that little tiny drop merge back into the sea, and instantly it becomes the entire ocean in a flash! Great job with this one.
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And let that little tiny drop merge back into the sea, and instantly it becomes the entire ocean in a flash! Great job with this one.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Steve :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow ! That is deep Brooke and really an enjoyable read with perfect rhyme and meter as always. I love the picture you selected and I love poems about the sea. Good job. xx Nancy
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Wow ! That is deep Brooke and really an enjoyable read with perfect rhyme and meter as always. I love the picture you selected and I love poems about the sea. Good job. xx Nancy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Nancy, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome Brooke. :<) Nancy
Comment from ravenblack
Very wise as nature always is when carefully observed. The whole is always made of parts and thought those parts seem small, without out them collaborating in a system, there would be no whole.
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Very wise as nature always is when carefully observed. The whole is always made of parts and thought those parts seem small, without out them collaborating in a system, there would be no whole.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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thank you, ravenblack, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
Good job, Brooke, with your conversational poem between the sea and the tiny drop of rain. You are so clever and good at painting strong imagery of the big sea thanking the tiny drop of rain. It has a nice message to all the tiny drops of rain in the world. 8-)
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Good job, Brooke, with your conversational poem between the sea and the tiny drop of rain. You are so clever and good at painting strong imagery of the big sea thanking the tiny drop of rain. It has a nice message to all the tiny drops of rain in the world. 8-)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Amazing how little rain drops add up the be rushing waterfalls that empty into a big sea. Well done , Brooke. Another good one. My blessings to you.
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Amazing how little rain drops add up the be rushing waterfalls that empty into a big sea. Well done , Brooke. Another good one. My blessings to you.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Ben :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
The ocean is composed of trillions drops of water. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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The ocean is composed of trillions drops of water. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Charlie :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from sibhus
Wow, great poem, Brooke. I like how you have sorta of-what persomalized the process of water. I guess that's what I'm trying to say. With these great rhymes that really beautify some thing that we all take for granted. A really good poem, Brooke.
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Wow, great poem, Brooke. I like how you have sorta of-what persomalized the process of water. I guess that's what I'm trying to say. With these great rhymes that really beautify some thing that we all take for granted. A really good poem, Brooke.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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sibhus, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
I'm but a tiny drop of rain, indeed the beautiful sea,that's a very lovely expressed poem Brooke, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
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I'm but a tiny drop of rain, indeed the beautiful sea,that's a very lovely expressed poem Brooke, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Erich, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
