The Moon Is My Companion
a rhyming poem in 7/6/7/6127 total reviews
Comment from RodG
It's nice to see the speaker has several friends out there in space, the Sun and the Moon.
It's interesting that the sun is a female, but Moon does not appear to have a gender.
I like how Moon becomes his "night light."
A warm feeling comes through here as the child feels comfort in Moon's presence.
Rod
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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It's nice to see the speaker has several friends out there in space, the Sun and the Moon.
It's interesting that the sun is a female, but Moon does not appear to have a gender.
I like how Moon becomes his "night light."
A warm feeling comes through here as the child feels comfort in Moon's presence.
Rod
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Rod :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...well since I am pretty much an insomniac, this poem hits the spot. I actually like the moon better than the sun...but only in summer when the air is warm...
I light the night light images...
padumachitta
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Hi...well since I am pretty much an insomniac, this poem hits the spot. I actually like the moon better than the sun...but only in summer when the air is warm...
I light the night light images...
padumachitta
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
Brooke, I am a huge fan of the moon, the magic it shares and the mystery of its glow... Wow, great poem! Loved the rhymes and your taking us through the course of 24 hrs with mention of the moon and sun. This poem sounds great read aloud with the alliteration and quick lines.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Brooke, I am a huge fan of the moon, the magic it shares and the mystery of its glow... Wow, great poem! Loved the rhymes and your taking us through the course of 24 hrs with mention of the moon and sun. This poem sounds great read aloud with the alliteration and quick lines.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Nadine :-) Brooke
Comment from Debra White
Hi Brooke :)
Another beautifully simple and perfect presentation.
I love your personification of the moon and sun - both being friend, companion and guide at their given time.
Thank you so much for sharing this. Absolutely lovely.
Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Hi Brooke :)
Another beautifully simple and perfect presentation.
I love your personification of the moon and sun - both being friend, companion and guide at their given time.
Thank you so much for sharing this. Absolutely lovely.
Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Debra, for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from closetpoetjester
Awww this was berry cute Brookers and I just love your take on the moon and sun and the partnership you share with each of them at their respective "show times". LOL They do sound as though they are the perfect companion when expressed like this. Expertly handled as always with minimum word count and MAXIMUM impact.
Oh how I envy thou! LOL
Can't WAIT for the long awaited children's book. I WILL be purchsing one for my kids. Just DON'T leave it till they've left home, okay?? LOL
So when was that publishing date?
Hugs P
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Awww this was berry cute Brookers and I just love your take on the moon and sun and the partnership you share with each of them at their respective "show times". LOL They do sound as though they are the perfect companion when expressed like this. Expertly handled as always with minimum word count and MAXIMUM impact.
Oh how I envy thou! LOL
Can't WAIT for the long awaited children's book. I WILL be purchsing one for my kids. Just DON'T leave it till they've left home, okay?? LOL
So when was that publishing date?
Hugs P
x
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Phillippa. I promise promise that I am getting to the publishing thing. My daughter will kill me otherwise :-) Brooke
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Then I will kill you after her too.
So get ONTO it Missy.
LOL
xx
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LOL - You two would get along, I can tell :-)
Comment from Lulube
Simplistic, sweet, scenario's for the moon. Fondness expressed for this gentle light that has been the center of attention all over the world.
good rhyming and great flow
lulube
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Simplistic, sweet, scenario's for the moon. Fondness expressed for this gentle light that has been the center of attention all over the world.
good rhyming and great flow
lulube
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Lulube, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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welcome Brooke
lulube
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
It almost becomes tedious to come up with new adjectives to show appreciation for your smooth poetry. They are complex without being difficult, smooth without being dull, elegant without being overly flamboyant. Thanks again.
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It almost becomes tedious to come up with new adjectives to show appreciation for your smooth poetry. They are complex without being difficult, smooth without being dull, elegant without being overly flamboyant. Thanks again.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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lighthouse keeper, I appreciate your gracious comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Dom G Robles
I like this poem. Its use of personification is notable and great. The rhyme and rhythm, although not maintained
throughout, is pretty. It flowed freely. The picture presented is varied, keen, and lovely. I read the poem aloud and the sound is admirable. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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I like this poem. Its use of personification is notable and great. The rhyme and rhythm, although not maintained
throughout, is pretty. It flowed freely. The picture presented is varied, keen, and lovely. I read the poem aloud and the sound is admirable. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Dom, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. It made me smile. I love to watch the moon and stars at night it gives me such a great pleasure.
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. It made me smile. I love to watch the moon and stars at night it gives me such a great pleasure.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Cajungirl, thank you so much for your generous and gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
I do love the sun, but the night sky is so special to me and the beauty of the night. Your artwork is stunning, and of course you know your poetic devices are always stellar.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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I do love the sun, but the night sky is so special to me and the beauty of the night. Your artwork is stunning, and of course you know your poetic devices are always stellar.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
