The Moon Is My Companion
a rhyming poem in 7/6/7/6127 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
Unfortunately, unlike the sun, the moon doesn't always shine at night :) This is another very well written poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
Unfortunately, unlike the sun, the moon doesn't always shine at night :) This is another very well written poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful account of the difference yet similarity of moon and sun light! Whichever watches over you.
Thank you for sharing!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
This is a beautiful account of the difference yet similarity of moon and sun light! Whichever watches over you.
Thank you for sharing!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Rebekka, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Acquired Taste
With all the dark, brooding poems of late with the time of year, this is a nice diversion. Late evening sky, autumn leaves kissed goodnight by the lovely moonbeams. Enjoying these Brooke. Jean
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
With all the dark, brooding poems of late with the time of year, this is a nice diversion. Late evening sky, autumn leaves kissed goodnight by the lovely moonbeams. Enjoying these Brooke. Jean
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Jean, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from playinaround
I really enjoyed this one. Poems about the sun and the moon are really magical and give warm feelings. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
I really enjoyed this one. Poems about the sun and the moon are really magical and give warm feelings. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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playinaround, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tdragonfly
Cute companion poem to the one about the sun. I like how the moon becomes your hero at night to keep you safe until the sun returns in the morning.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
Cute companion poem to the one about the sun. I like how the moon becomes your hero at night to keep you safe until the sun returns in the morning.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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tdragonfly, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
You sure have some powerful friends, Brooke, what with the sun, and now the moon. ;-)
You also have a STAR for a friend - ME! LOL.
Nice, enjoyable easy read to start my morning.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
You sure have some powerful friends, Brooke, what with the sun, and now the moon. ;-)
You also have a STAR for a friend - ME! LOL.
Nice, enjoyable easy read to start my morning.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Ray, thank you for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brooke, this is a most beautiful portrayal of the moon at night, with really good rhyming and rhythm, excellent imagery and description, and as always that lovely smooth flow.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
Hi Brooke, this is a most beautiful portrayal of the moon at night, with really good rhyming and rhythm, excellent imagery and description, and as always that lovely smooth flow.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Eric, for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
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You are welcome Brooke.
Comment from Gargantuan2
The night is something I see a lot of as an auditor for a hotel. This is a nice little poem that gives me reason to believe others know it as well as I do :)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
The night is something I see a lot of as an auditor for a hotel. This is a nice little poem that gives me reason to believe others know it as well as I do :)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Gargantuan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Whether in the day or in the night to have a friend is wonderful. To have a companion to guide your steps is the very best. To have a friend who will write wonderful poems to entertain you is the best of all time. Thank you.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
Whether in the day or in the night to have a friend is wonderful. To have a companion to guide your steps is the very best. To have a friend who will write wonderful poems to entertain you is the best of all time. Thank you.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you, nomi, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Curly Girly
This is really cute. I reckon kids will like it too. You chose a lovely image to go with it. The rhyme is simple and easy to read and enjoy.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
This is really cute. I reckon kids will like it too. You chose a lovely image to go with it. The rhyme is simple and easy to read and enjoy.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Curly Girly, thanks so much :-) Brooke