I Issued an Invitation
poem in mixed meter and abcb rhyme122 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'I Issued an Invitation' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. The Sun definitely has her own agenda. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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'I Issued an Invitation' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. The Sun definitely has her own agenda. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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duchess, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Brooke, as always you're very welcome
:-) the Duchess
Comment from Pili Pubul
An astounding poetic treat, your comunication and personal
relationship with the sun is so original !!! Perfect style , great imagery
a delight to read and savor . Pili
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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An astounding poetic treat, your comunication and personal
relationship with the sun is so original !!! Perfect style , great imagery
a delight to read and savor . Pili
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Pili, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome... Pili
Comment from PatVallesMangan
This poem really struck a chord in my heart. The beauty of the cycles of night and day, ... and the author well brings this out, in a beautiful use of personification. I so enjoyed reviewing this. The rhyme and rhythm are very complementary as is the picture. Good luck in the contest and Bright Blessings! ~ pat :)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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This poem really struck a chord in my heart. The beauty of the cycles of night and day, ... and the author well brings this out, in a beautiful use of personification. I so enjoyed reviewing this. The rhyme and rhythm are very complementary as is the picture. Good luck in the contest and Bright Blessings! ~ pat :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Pat,thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Winslow
Dear Brooke,
The radiant sun all decked out in a coat of golden light dazzles everyone. Always superb rhyming and flow and an excellent picture for high lighting this poem.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Dear Brooke,
The radiant sun all decked out in a coat of golden light dazzles everyone. Always superb rhyming and flow and an excellent picture for high lighting this poem.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Winslow, thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from seaglass
I love sunshine and only recently developed a liking for rain. This wonderfully rhymed poem give personhood to Earth's greatest star. A fun rhyme.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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I love sunshine and only recently developed a liking for rain. This wonderfully rhymed poem give personhood to Earth's greatest star. A fun rhyme.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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seaglass, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dr. Nad
I may be a newbie,(Less than 48 hours), but I know what I like in Poetry. I haven't figured out much about this site but I believe I have found friends who not only get my work but like it. I have never shown anything I have written outside of close friends and family. B U T . . . My purpose is to rate "I Issued an Invitation" This Poem is so flawless from beginning to end. It starts with the title and tells us a story succinctly and cleanly. There is nothing superfluous or contrived in it: Boom, Boom, Bam! I will be following you!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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I may be a newbie,(Less than 48 hours), but I know what I like in Poetry. I haven't figured out much about this site but I believe I have found friends who not only get my work but like it. I have never shown anything I have written outside of close friends and family. B U T . . . My purpose is to rate "I Issued an Invitation" This Poem is so flawless from beginning to end. It starts with the title and tells us a story succinctly and cleanly. There is nothing superfluous or contrived in it: Boom, Boom, Bam! I will be following you!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Dr. Nad, thank you so much. Welcome to Fan Story!! Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from MaggieMcCall
This is so beautiful and wonderfully written, and you managed to be so creative and meaningful within a strict rhyme scheme. The art you chose is totally beautiful. Thank you for sharing this!
Maggie
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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This is so beautiful and wonderfully written, and you managed to be so creative and meaningful within a strict rhyme scheme. The art you chose is totally beautiful. Thank you for sharing this!
Maggie
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Maggie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very clever poem with the perfect choice of picture. "I'll try to come tomorrow." She can never promise, since she doesn't control the clouds. :)
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Very clever poem with the perfect choice of picture. "I'll try to come tomorrow." She can never promise, since she doesn't control the clouds. :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Phyllis, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Neonewman
Dear Brooke, this is one of my favorite pieces i have read of yours thus far. The rhyme and meter just melted in my mouth and has left my cravings satisfied. God bless!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Dear Brooke, this is one of my favorite pieces i have read of yours thus far. The rhyme and meter just melted in my mouth and has left my cravings satisfied. God bless!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Neonewman, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Since you and Sun are so close
Would you mind asking
For a month long basking
Not extra hot, just a healthy dose
Enough to keep the coolness at bay
For a little while longer
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Since you and Sun are so close
Would you mind asking
For a month long basking
Not extra hot, just a healthy dose
Enough to keep the coolness at bay
For a little while longer
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much. I really do wish I wielded that kind of influence, my friend. I'm not even close to ready for winter :-) Brooke
