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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from ProjectBluebook
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interesting conversations... castration without representation. That's the spirit, Blaze. Nice picture. Looks spagless, like usual. A procrastinator like me does like to review every century. I may have skipped a chapter. Count your doubloon. wackydo

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    Thank you my dear wacky friend for the generous sixer. Much appreciated. I am SO far behind in reviewing, but at least I managed to finish a new chapter to post later today. :)
reply by ProjectBluebook on 05-Nov-2014
    Good job! I'm trying to earn some doubloon today, too. I got a chapter almost ready but I always promote it, especially when it's a blind entry and a long chapter, the rules. So, what did you go as on Helloween? Maybe you went as a school teacher or Blaze? I went as Pee Wee Herman. I got bashed by a Buick crossing a 4-way crosswalk. Haha. I got to get a new fender and bike horn. Lol! Are the parents still there? Did Amanda go as a Lil' Genie? Her nickname. Haha! I gave you me last sixer. Mikey will survive. Haha! He's got his trikey. Just some humor to get your day rolling. Oh, wacky me -- excuse me.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Yes, parents are STILL Here... but leaving early next week.

    We didn't do Halloween here. Too old and tired of it all. :)

    I'm waaayyy behind in reviews, but I'll be sure to take a look at you newest, wackiest chapter. :)
reply by ProjectBluebook on 06-Nov-2014
    You're not obligated to review. Keep your Howdy Doody robo-suit smiling. You can jerk it off when the guests leave. Wonder what's under that robo suit? Lol!
Comment from ravenblack
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Okay, Lorna Blair a tip of the hat to Linda Blair, but is Lorna also a tip off/of the... Hat to Lorena Bobbit? Luke is a slow learner but I think he will learn fast if Lorna has a pair of scissors.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
    LOL! Lorena Bobbit! What genius... wish I'd thought of that. Luke can always get a new dick, since he uses borrowed ones anyway. Darnit. Would've been fun. LOL!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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Caught up! Interesting alliance these two have. Doubtful they can control Luke, but it'll be fun watching it. Liking this new story featuring Blaze, Phyllis.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much for reading all that! :)
Comment from Muffins
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Lorna may give Lucifer a run for his money. This is a determine woman with a seemingly horrible history with men. Now, it appears she's gonna blast a ray of revenge all over the place. She is a juicy character and I have a feeling there will be a head knocking battle of the titans here. Great chapter.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much, Muffins. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from michaelcahill
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I'm not so sure Luke is going to want Lorna as a recruit. I think she may be more than he can handle. Might be fun to kill her off half way through and have her show up as the demon of DOOM! Great chapter. This looks like fun!! mikey

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
    Thanks, Mikey. Interesting plot idea, but I don't like to kill off characters. However... :)
Comment from Cajungirl
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What I think is old Lucifer has the wrong right hand woman. Lorna is much more sadistic. LOL

I can't wait to find out what she has in mind. Perhaps it will be even too much for Blaze.

Another exceptional chapter, Phyllis.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
    Thanks a million for the sixer, Vergie. I agree about Lorna, but then I don't much like or trust lawyers. :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
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There's something about Lorna I sort of like. She's feisty and determined. I can almost imagine her cutting Luke's man bits off. Can't wait to see what this plan is. After the senator's performance at the wedding it won't be easy to get him re-elected.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thanks, Cindy. Lorna is a lot like Blaze... maybe even worse. LOL!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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These two seem to be a very good match that will probably stir up more trouble than two teenagers with unlimited Master cards. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thanks, Ric. Yes, they do seem to be similar. :)
Comment from Fridayauthor
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This is a fun read with a lot of very good dialog. The conversation moves the story along very well and I especially like the pushy questions and Blaze's reaction to them.

The posting ends on a nice pull to the next chapter.

Good job!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much. :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Hi Phyllis,

There is so much truth behind this political farce. Lorna is a lively character who, I'm sure, will come up with a good plan to get Blake off.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much, Lou. :)