Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

It seems Sawyer had a very good time at Halloween and really enjoyed it. The notes are nice to read and complement the poem. Nicely done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Sarah, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Exceptional

This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This is a wonderful story about Sawyer's Halloween.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke I appreciate those generous stars! :-)

reply by Tomes Johnston on 02-Nov-2014

My pleasure

Comment from Gargantuan2

Excellent

From all that you have described of the young ones, it surprises me not that he heeds no danger in the face of treat retrieving. I hope he had a lot of fun, and yourself as well. :)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Gargantuan :-) Brooke

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

I'd say that Sawyer has abright future ahead. He already appears to possess courage, focus and determination.
"Eyes on the prize" seems to be the way to go.
As a nanna myself I love to hear of Sawyer's day.
A lovely image and recount.
:) Shirley

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, Shirley, my fellow grandma :-) Brooke

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Another Halloween hipshot, pretty much on target. Had cold rain and zero trick or treaters on my wild mountain. Had the urge to go out myself. No costume needed.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, LIJ - yeah, we get not trick or treat action in my apartment complex - it's always nice to hear about the neighborhoods that enjoyed the fun :-) Brooke

Comment from CHIGYSISKI

Excellent

Nice poem. I liked the idea of walking by the headless bride and not noticing because he had a treat in mind- a reward.Perhaps I need to walk through the storms of life boldly, looking not at the situations before me, but at the reward in the end! Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Chi, thank you so much :-) Love your comments! Brooke

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Haha, nothing scares our brave Cute Little One. He keeps is eye on the prize and ignores the rest :) Looks like he had a lot of fun. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! Halloween "horror" as seen through the eyes of a candy-loving child. Brilliant! We do the scary decorations for ourselves, really, and have fun with it. The kids don't really care... they just want the candy! :)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Phyllis :-) Brooke

Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

LOL! Very good one! I used to go trick or treating without a costume or disguise...Some people fainted...Once, I got drunk(I was 37. You know how we are as kids...)and went trick or treating, nude. I woke up on my neighbor's driveway in a few puddles....

Peace,

Mike

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks so much for the laugh and the review, Mike :-) Brooke

reply by mikemagine on 02-Nov-2014

Sure thing, Brooke:-)

Mike

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Cute one, Brooke. Sawyer is a smart kid. He knows something fake when he sees it. LOL. I'm glad he wasn't frightened of those things. Good job with this one, too. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Miss Sally - yes, he is very good at understanding what is let's pretend :-) Brooke