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Mother, From Her Head To Soles

Essay about mothers

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Comment from Mia Twysted
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This is a very sweet piece. It is a reminder of all the things our mother did, does, and will do with us while she is here on this world. A tribute to the women who helped and loved us.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
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Lovely! In a traditional way. Love the photo. You just reminded me of Breck shampoo and the pretty Breck girl pictures. My mother used Breck and I always thought she looked as pretty as the Breck girls :) There is nothing here to alter.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your work.
Cheers! And Happy Mother's Day to You!

 Comment Written 09-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from GeraldS
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I don't normally read anything that has any sort of religious bent to it, but I liked this tribute you wrote. And your timing couldn't be better.

My mother died when I was three years old so I have only the most fleeting memories of her. So I honor my wife instead. She gave birth four times on my behalf, and she has always taken care of me as well as them. So it is she that I salute on Mother's Day... she's not my mother, but she is the mother of my children.

 Comment Written 06-May-2016


reply by the author on 06-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing. I am sorry for the lose of your mother at such a tender age. It is a blessing you can look at your wife in this way, it is lovely.
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is a very cute picture, Patricia. My mother died when I was very young, so I have really no memories of her, just very vague shadows.

You have however written a wonderful essay including the array of literary devices to convey that special relationship.

Lovely job with this. :))

gloria

 Comment Written 05-May-2016


reply by the author on 06-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed it. I am sorry you lost your mother at such a tender age.
Comment from foxangie123
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You are so talented and gifted my friend. What gorgeous girls indeed. You take my breath away as you write in such a magnificent and lovely manner. Please never stop.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016


reply by the author on 06-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing. I love being the mother of these children yet today as they are all in their 50's
Comment from William Ross
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This is wonderful Pat I don't think it would of hurt to mention breasts for the milk of life or something here. but a wonderful piece on moms. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 05-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Thank you for your review, William.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A good mother is an angel send by God to care for little angels and teach them to become great angels too when they have their own little angels to care for.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016


reply by the author on 05-May-2016
    Thank you Sandra, for your review.
Comment from JPilcher
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Oh Pat!! This reminds me of the pic in "My Other Mothers" that I posted!!! My mother was, for sure, wonderfully put together by god himself. She did and still continues to do as God would expect her to. She's an amazing woman and I know you must be to. I'm so glad we connected!!! <3 Jill

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    There is one thing I am really pleased about above any other and that is I having been raised in a very dysfunctional home was able to provide a wonderful home life for my daughters. Motherhood has been my greatest honor.
reply by JPilcher on 06-Nov-2014
    You're ADORABLE!!! I ALREADY LOVE YOU PAT (& I don't even like a lot of people! Lol!)!!!!! :) <3
Comment from emrpoems
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A wonderful gift for Mothers Day. You spelt it out in detail and what you describe is so accurate . God was thoughtful when he created us.
An enjoyable read and lovely picture of your daughters

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
    Thank you for the nice review. God gave me the essay and it probably took about 15 minutes to write.
Comment from Jackarrie
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I love the photo of your children you must be so proud of them. your poem describes a mother that has the abilities to nurture and take care of their children. This is why women have a different brain to men.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
    Thanks for the review. Just for fun I should try to write this as a man might write it.