Mother, From Her Head To Soles
Essay about mothers15 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a very sweet piece. It is a reminder of all the things our mother did, does, and will do with us while she is here on this world. A tribute to the women who helped and loved us.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
This is a very sweet piece. It is a reminder of all the things our mother did, does, and will do with us while she is here on this world. A tribute to the women who helped and loved us.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Lovely! In a traditional way. Love the photo. You just reminded me of Breck shampoo and the pretty Breck girl pictures. My mother used Breck and I always thought she looked as pretty as the Breck girls :) There is nothing here to alter.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your work.
Cheers! And Happy Mother's Day to You!
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
Lovely! In a traditional way. Love the photo. You just reminded me of Breck shampoo and the pretty Breck girl pictures. My mother used Breck and I always thought she looked as pretty as the Breck girls :) There is nothing here to alter.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your work.
Cheers! And Happy Mother's Day to You!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from GeraldS
I don't normally read anything that has any sort of religious bent to it, but I liked this tribute you wrote. And your timing couldn't be better.
My mother died when I was three years old so I have only the most fleeting memories of her. So I honor my wife instead. She gave birth four times on my behalf, and she has always taken care of me as well as them. So it is she that I salute on Mother's Day... she's not my mother, but she is the mother of my children.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
I don't normally read anything that has any sort of religious bent to it, but I liked this tribute you wrote. And your timing couldn't be better.
My mother died when I was three years old so I have only the most fleeting memories of her. So I honor my wife instead. She gave birth four times on my behalf, and she has always taken care of me as well as them. So it is she that I salute on Mother's Day... she's not my mother, but she is the mother of my children.
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thanks for reviewing. I am sorry for the lose of your mother at such a tender age. It is a blessing you can look at your wife in this way, it is lovely.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a very cute picture, Patricia. My mother died when I was very young, so I have really no memories of her, just very vague shadows.
You have however written a wonderful essay including the array of literary devices to convey that special relationship.
Lovely job with this. :))
gloria
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
This is a very cute picture, Patricia. My mother died when I was very young, so I have really no memories of her, just very vague shadows.
You have however written a wonderful essay including the array of literary devices to convey that special relationship.
Lovely job with this. :))
gloria
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thanks for reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed it. I am sorry you lost your mother at such a tender age.
Comment from foxangie123
You are so talented and gifted my friend. What gorgeous girls indeed. You take my breath away as you write in such a magnificent and lovely manner. Please never stop.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
You are so talented and gifted my friend. What gorgeous girls indeed. You take my breath away as you write in such a magnificent and lovely manner. Please never stop.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thanks for reviewing. I love being the mother of these children yet today as they are all in their 50's
Comment from William Ross
This is wonderful Pat I don't think it would of hurt to mention breasts for the milk of life or something here. but a wonderful piece on moms. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
This is wonderful Pat I don't think it would of hurt to mention breasts for the milk of life or something here. but a wonderful piece on moms. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you for your review, William.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A good mother is an angel send by God to care for little angels and teach them to become great angels too when they have their own little angels to care for.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
A good mother is an angel send by God to care for little angels and teach them to become great angels too when they have their own little angels to care for.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you Sandra, for your review.
Comment from JPilcher
Oh Pat!! This reminds me of the pic in "My Other Mothers" that I posted!!! My mother was, for sure, wonderfully put together by god himself. She did and still continues to do as God would expect her to. She's an amazing woman and I know you must be to. I'm so glad we connected!!! <3 Jill
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
Oh Pat!! This reminds me of the pic in "My Other Mothers" that I posted!!! My mother was, for sure, wonderfully put together by god himself. She did and still continues to do as God would expect her to. She's an amazing woman and I know you must be to. I'm so glad we connected!!! <3 Jill
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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There is one thing I am really pleased about above any other and that is I having been raised in a very dysfunctional home was able to provide a wonderful home life for my daughters. Motherhood has been my greatest honor.
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You're ADORABLE!!! I ALREADY LOVE YOU PAT (& I don't even like a lot of people! Lol!)!!!!! :) <3
Comment from emrpoems
A wonderful gift for Mothers Day. You spelt it out in detail and what you describe is so accurate . God was thoughtful when he created us.
An enjoyable read and lovely picture of your daughters
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
A wonderful gift for Mothers Day. You spelt it out in detail and what you describe is so accurate . God was thoughtful when he created us.
An enjoyable read and lovely picture of your daughters
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the nice review. God gave me the essay and it probably took about 15 minutes to write.
Comment from Jackarrie
I love the photo of your children you must be so proud of them. your poem describes a mother that has the abilities to nurture and take care of their children. This is why women have a different brain to men.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
I love the photo of your children you must be so proud of them. your poem describes a mother that has the abilities to nurture and take care of their children. This is why women have a different brain to men.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review. Just for fun I should try to write this as a man might write it.