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Trip Stone

sweet tale

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Comment from honeytree
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Very interesting words written for this poem.

We are born to live and love others within our world.

When we hurt others within our lives God knows.

We should all be thankful we are safe within our home.

honey tree

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2014

Comment from ravim
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Wonderful poem that brings to focus the futility of feud. Taking the tombstones as your characters was very creative. And you built a moral principle around it. Texas can now reast in peace?!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014