Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

I was a bit shocked to read the title as it's not the sort of subject I expect to read about but after reading it I understand the message you are conveying. Great job!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks so much:)

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear TAB,

For some have foul mouths that is for sure. As you say in your poem just climb to the surface and get out of there.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks Winslow:)

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Once again, another good poem. We have to walk away and wash the filth from our being. Some people devour us and are not satisfied until they have succeeded. I never really thought about it like this before. Good job, Tab.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thank you Drew:)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Love the way you get things off your chest, Tab, lol, I could say the same about some people I know! Your title is so appropriate for the thoughts you are conveying, well done! xsx sandra

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks Sandra:)

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

Ah yes the energy that comes from feces !!! Got to love it ! Gosh I have no more 6s to give coz I would give one just for the theme alone ! well done !

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you for the thought of the six:)

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Lovely artwork that complements your poem very well. I already reviewed one by someone who got inspired by you. Your free verse is great and so original. Alliteration and assonance

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you Ine. I didn't know someone got inspired by this. Do you remember who it was?

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Teresa, Please remind me never to uposet you my friend, this wonderfully written free verse poem certainly packs a punch, but I daresay it's nice to get it off your chest, writing it down is the best therapy, but oh, those poor recipients.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

lol. I'm really not that bad to get along with but on that day there seemed to be so much negative energy around me.

reply by Eric1 on 01-Nov-2014

Yes, I too get days like that Teresa, but then the Wife goes out lol.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Tab. Boy this one is strong! I call individuals like this "energy suckers" as they have no positive flow to their lives and drain the essence of goodness from everyone around them. Great write. Vivid! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks Kiwi:)

Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

Who have you been hanging with? :) Some folks to have a certain air about them...now I know why. But please, tell us how you really feel? :)

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks:)

Comment from MaggieMcCall

Excellent

Oh wow, what a disturbing poem. In a very good way! I can't say I totally understand what it's about, but I have definitely had people in my life who I felt like left fecal energy in my soul. Thanks for sharing this!

Maggie

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Yes that it what it is about - the negative energy from others. Thanks for the review:)