Excuse me mister monster.
A child scared of the closet monster.97 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I really love these words and art work.
When we are children sometimes we can be scared
of monsters around us.
Maybe we have dreams of a monster near as a child dreaming.
Maybe you did see a monster?
honey tree
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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I really love these words and art work.
When we are children sometimes we can be scared
of monsters around us.
Maybe we have dreams of a monster near as a child dreaming.
Maybe you did see a monster?
honey tree
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Thank you Honeytree for another inspiring review and yes, when I was a child I was very afraid of the thing under my bed. God bless!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Terrific poem about a very real fear for many young children. Where do the ideas of monsters come from? Kids' TV and movies, I'd bet. Don't get me started on the "Evil Queen" or other villain in every story for a CHILD. Can't we get aaway from that nonsense???
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Terrific poem about a very real fear for many young children. Where do the ideas of monsters come from? Kids' TV and movies, I'd bet. Don't get me started on the "Evil Queen" or other villain in every story for a CHILD. Can't we get aaway from that nonsense???
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Thank you Phyllis Stewart for this most inspiring review and generous star count. I agree on children stories being a little scary these days. Maybe we should up the stakes and write better children stories ourselves. I would love to make a positive difference in their lives. God bless!
Comment from seaglass
This brought back memories of my fears of the closet during my childhood. My dad finally took off the door and we filled it up with my dresser and some shelves. lol. The rhyme and rhythm work well and the picture is perfect.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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This brought back memories of my fears of the closet during my childhood. My dad finally took off the door and we filled it up with my dresser and some shelves. lol. The rhyme and rhythm work well and the picture is perfect.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Thank you Seaglass for the awesome review, I think we all had our monsters growing up. I was scared of whatever I thought was under my bed LOL! God Bless!
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Congratulations on your poem being so effective. That means it is convincing, and especially suitable for a little child. I enjoyed it very much and best of luck for the competition.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Congratulations on your poem being so effective. That means it is convincing, and especially suitable for a little child. I enjoyed it very much and best of luck for the competition.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Thank you Giddy for the most inspiring of reviews. I appreciate all that comes my way. God bless!
Comment from Charlene0513
A very fitting and wise assumption to depict and convey and soothe his greatest fears. Having such a fear could have easily robbed him of his childhood.
I'm sure it was much appreciated by your friend.
Charlene
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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A very fitting and wise assumption to depict and convey and soothe his greatest fears. Having such a fear could have easily robbed him of his childhood.
I'm sure it was much appreciated by your friend.
Charlene
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Thank you Charlene, it was appreciated by her but she really never knew how much joy it brought me to know this kiddo was no longer afraid because of it. God bless!
Comment from Irish Rain
Awww! So sweet of you to give this to your co-worker for her son! Of course Jesus will send those monsters packing! I'm 56, and STILL won't dangle a foot over the edge of the bed, for fear of THE THING under the bed! Maybe I'll take your poem with me, ha ha!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Awww! So sweet of you to give this to your co-worker for her son! Of course Jesus will send those monsters packing! I'm 56, and STILL won't dangle a foot over the edge of the bed, for fear of THE THING under the bed! Maybe I'll take your poem with me, ha ha!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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LOL! Thank you Irish Rain for the inspiring review God Bless!
Comment from JudyS
This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read a lot. I'm glad you posted the notes about how it made a little boy overcome his fears. Great job! Best of luck in the contest. Judy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read a lot. I'm glad you posted the notes about how it made a little boy overcome his fears. Great job! Best of luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank youu Judy for another inspiring review and my biggest reward came out of helping that poor baby. God Bless!
Comment from amahra
Oh this is so cute. I really like it. I love these contest. They bring out the creativity in all of us. The art work is stunning and so appropriate for this writing. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Oh this is so cute. I really like it. I love these contest. They bring out the creativity in all of us. The art work is stunning and so appropriate for this writing. Good job.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you Amahra for yet another inspiring review. I love them as well, i enjoy the challenges. God bless!
Comment from MissMerri
This does seem like a good poem to read to a child afraid of the unseen monsters in the closet. I liked that the story is told from a child's point of view. I also liked the letter to Jesus, although the meter in that last line could use a little editing. The theme and style of this poem are excellent.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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This does seem like a good poem to read to a child afraid of the unseen monsters in the closet. I liked that the story is told from a child's point of view. I also liked the letter to Jesus, although the meter in that last line could use a little editing. The theme and style of this poem are excellent.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you MissMerri for the inspiring review and excellent stars. I love the whole kids praying to Jesus as well. I will see what i can figure out with the last line, I am relatively new at the poetry thing LOL! God bless!
Comment from Veeb
Very sweet and sincere poem. Love the elementary speech and the lyrical flow. "Mom and Dad say you aren't real" is wonderfully true of parental reassurance against monsters. So, he takes his case to a higher court - Jesus! - who "will send you away." Very original and fun read. Your picture compliments beautifully. I wish you good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Very sweet and sincere poem. Love the elementary speech and the lyrical flow. "Mom and Dad say you aren't real" is wonderfully true of parental reassurance against monsters. So, he takes his case to a higher court - Jesus! - who "will send you away." Very original and fun read. Your picture compliments beautifully. I wish you good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you Veeb for the most inspiring review and generous stars. I love the way you worded taking it to a higher court. God bless!
