Excuse me mister monster.
A child scared of the closet monster.97 total reviews
Comment from skye
I wrote Jesus a letter. Children are so literal, that this solution is perfect to keep the monsters away. Prayers often seem intangible, so a letter is terific.
I really think this little poem could be helpful for lots of families.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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I wrote Jesus a letter. Children are so literal, that this solution is perfect to keep the monsters away. Prayers often seem intangible, so a letter is terific.
I really think this little poem could be helpful for lots of families.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Skye for another inspiring review. I love the huge outpour this piece has brought forth. God bless!
Comment from l.raven
what a wonderful poem...and I am so glad it has helped the little boy...and glad he talked to Jesus about it...I love the wording...very well written...and the perfect picture...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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what a wonderful poem...and I am so glad it has helped the little boy...and glad he talked to Jesus about it...I love the wording...very well written...and the perfect picture...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Linda for this inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from JM
This poem is me when I was a little girl. And yes, I prayed to Jesus to help me get rid of the monster behind the curtains. Definitely struck a nerve with me. Good poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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This poem is me when I was a little girl. And yes, I prayed to Jesus to help me get rid of the monster behind the curtains. Definitely struck a nerve with me. Good poem.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you JM for the awesome review and I am happy you received the help to get rid of the monster. God bless!
Comment from JPilcher
I LOVE THIS!!! This is the 1st children's poem I've read on here and as a Mother of two little girls, you've actually just inspired me to try some of my own out for the first time ever. If you can inspire someone from your writing - that's phenomenal to me - that's why this gets a 6. PS- I LOVE that he wrote Jesus a letter and the artwork is beyond perfect for this! Congrats & thank you!!!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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I LOVE THIS!!! This is the 1st children's poem I've read on here and as a Mother of two little girls, you've actually just inspired me to try some of my own out for the first time ever. If you can inspire someone from your writing - that's phenomenal to me - that's why this gets a 6. PS- I LOVE that he wrote Jesus a letter and the artwork is beyond perfect for this! Congrats & thank you!!!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you JPilcher for this most inspiring review and for the elusive 6 stars. I am honored that this piece is so well received. The child that this helped was the biggest reward I could have ever received for this piece. God bless and thank you again.
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You just gave me chills!! Those children are more than just blessings, aren't they?! ;)
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I forgot the title part I wanted to talk about!! The "Excuse me monster" is brilliant and shows that this child was raised right!! With manners!!! ;)
Comment from Leineco
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Ahhh. . .the ritual of banishment!
The power of faith in deliverance :-)
I can imagine many a young child
taking splice in this :-)
Nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Ahhh. . .the ritual of banishment!
The power of faith in deliverance :-)
I can imagine many a young child
taking splice in this :-)
Nicely done :-)
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Leineco for another most inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from nomi338
This is very authentic in nature, in that it genuinely seems to be from someone young in years. The encouraging message whether intended or not, is that the belief in a higher being will banish imaginary monsters and give you the courage to face uo to the very real ones as well.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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This is very authentic in nature, in that it genuinely seems to be from someone young in years. The encouraging message whether intended or not, is that the belief in a higher being will banish imaginary monsters and give you the courage to face uo to the very real ones as well.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Yes, they were intended Nomi, I feel through Christ all things are possible. God bless and thank you for the awesome review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a fun poem to read. I love how he reallized the toys would be in his closet in the moring. Great imagery and the voice of the child seemed authentic. Good rhythm and flow. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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This was a fun poem to read. I love how he reallized the toys would be in his closet in the moring. Great imagery and the voice of the child seemed authentic. Good rhythm and flow. Gretchen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Gretchen for this inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from K. Lorraine
Precious and few are the comforting words in this poetic verse. I do think a child of four would ask Jesus to keep him safe the monsters that lurk in the darkness of night. Your sentiment touched my heart. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Precious and few are the comforting words in this poetic verse. I do think a child of four would ask Jesus to keep him safe the monsters that lurk in the darkness of night. Your sentiment touched my heart. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you K.Lorraine for this most inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from judiverse
Very interesting. This does a great job of showing how small children are frightened by the idea of monsters hiding in the closet or under the bed. Sometimes adults tell stories that frighten the children. Excellent rhyme in this, and you express things the way a child would be feeling them. Writing the letter to Jesus is a great idea for the little guy. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Very interesting. This does a great job of showing how small children are frightened by the idea of monsters hiding in the closet or under the bed. Sometimes adults tell stories that frighten the children. Excellent rhyme in this, and you express things the way a child would be feeling them. Writing the letter to Jesus is a great idea for the little guy. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Judi for another inspiring review and the Jesus will conquer all. God bless!
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from RGstar
Love the tale in your author's notes.
Love the emphasis of this from a child's point of view as we have all been there, and I dare say some of us are still.
One for the kids.
Good write.
RGstar
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Love the tale in your author's notes.
Love the emphasis of this from a child's point of view as we have all been there, and I dare say some of us are still.
One for the kids.
Good write.
RGstar
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you RGstar, yes some of us may still be there LOL! Things that go bump in the night sometimes wake me! God bless!
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Me too, my friend ha,ha
