Excuse me mister monster.
A child scared of the closet monster.97 total reviews
Comment from likeduhxbella
I thought this poem was very cute in a four year old perspective, it pretty much sounds like its coming from a young kid when they think a monster is in the closet. I absolutely love the title, its perfect for this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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I thought this poem was very cute in a four year old perspective, it pretty much sounds like its coming from a young kid when they think a monster is in the closet. I absolutely love the title, its perfect for this poem.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you likeduhxbella for the awesome review. God bless!
Comment from Drew Delaney
That is such an awesome story of what you did in your author notes.
To relieve a child of their fears is so inspirational.
The poem is so cute as well. I would like to read it to my grandchildren one day. Thanks for sharing, and I see you won the contest. Good on you!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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That is such an awesome story of what you did in your author notes.
To relieve a child of their fears is so inspirational.
The poem is so cute as well. I would like to read it to my grandchildren one day. Thanks for sharing, and I see you won the contest. Good on you!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Drew for the inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from victor 66
Congratulations on your most deserved win. Telling a story is one thing, telling it in a poetic form with rhyme is quite the challenge. There is a sincerity to this as well. Best wishes.
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Congratulations on your most deserved win. Telling a story is one thing, telling it in a poetic form with rhyme is quite the challenge. There is a sincerity to this as well. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Victor and I always enjoy reading your inspiring reviews. God bless!
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You are most gracious, and you are most welcome.
Comment from MM lives on :)
hello poet, yes the picture illustrates the fear of the innocent..playful as it may seem it indeed is as real as it gets. great poem !
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hello poet, yes the picture illustrates the fear of the innocent..playful as it may seem it indeed is as real as it gets. great poem !
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Christopher for this most inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from alexisleech
I can well understand why this was a winner. Apart from your excellent rhyme and rhythm, You have managed to portray the thoughts of a child beautifully! Alexis x
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I can well understand why this was a winner. Apart from your excellent rhyme and rhythm, You have managed to portray the thoughts of a child beautifully! Alexis x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Alexisleech for this most inspiring reveiw. God bless!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, neonwoman, you did an excellent job writing this poem, I love the faith of the child that Jesus will kick the monster to the curb. a friend of mine said her grandson was scared of the dark and she always told him that Jesus was there with him so he didn't have to worry. one time it grew dark and stormy. he kept asking for the light to be cut on. she said Nicholas, Jesus is right beside you. He answered, Jesus said He wants the light on.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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this is an excellent write, neonwoman, you did an excellent job writing this poem, I love the faith of the child that Jesus will kick the monster to the curb. a friend of mine said her grandson was scared of the dark and she always told him that Jesus was there with him so he didn't have to worry. one time it grew dark and stormy. he kept asking for the light to be cut on. she said Nicholas, Jesus is right beside you. He answered, Jesus said He wants the light on.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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This is the sweetest review ever, the things that kids think of on the spur of the moment. Thank you sweetwoodjax. God bless!
Comment from Wendyanne
Aw what a cute poem!! I could picture the little child feeling scared of the 'monster' behind the door and having faith in Jesus to send it away. Well done on your win.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Aw what a cute poem!! I could picture the little child feeling scared of the 'monster' behind the door and having faith in Jesus to send it away. Well done on your win.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Wendyanne for another inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from Bryana
An absolutely lovely poem. I understand why it
was the winner. My congratulations!!!
To write this from a child's point of view
was great! I'm sure any four year old would
feel this way, but his faith in Jesus helped
him overcome his fear.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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An absolutely lovely poem. I understand why it
was the winner. My congratulations!!!
To write this from a child's point of view
was great! I'm sure any four year old would
feel this way, but his faith in Jesus helped
him overcome his fear.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Bryana for this most inspiring review. I am so happy this has been so well received. God bless!
Comment from Martin Chan
"Excuse me mister monster" is a child's contest poem winner poetry. No wonder this poem won the contest as it is written so nicely with such simple words and yet it is a class in its own. A reader can visualize the picture while reading the poem.
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"Excuse me mister monster" is a child's contest poem winner poetry. No wonder this poem won the contest as it is written so nicely with such simple words and yet it is a class in its own. A reader can visualize the picture while reading the poem.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you again Martin Chan for this inspiring 6 star review. God bless!
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You are welcome
Comment from DSMalott
A very brave and confident little tike who learns the challenge of facing his fears with spiritual confidence. I remember similar processes with my four children, way back when. Your simple rhymes were well placed and brought out your clever conclusion with style.
Thanks for writing.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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A very brave and confident little tike who learns the challenge of facing his fears with spiritual confidence. I remember similar processes with my four children, way back when. Your simple rhymes were well placed and brought out your clever conclusion with style.
Thanks for writing.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you DSMalott for this most inspiring review. God bless!
