Truthful Jones, Greatest Babysitter
Short Story-World's Greatest Babysitter45 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Hi Micheal, you are a treacherous writer, I was just a gittin in ter this mighty ole tale an ya all go an pull the plug on me! Your writing is superb with well drawn characters, the dialogue is absolutely brilliant once you get your head round it, and the writing, well it just sucks the reader in. Can't wait to see what happens next my friend.
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Hi Micheal, you are a treacherous writer, I was just a gittin in ter this mighty ole tale an ya all go an pull the plug on me! Your writing is superb with well drawn characters, the dialogue is absolutely brilliant once you get your head round it, and the writing, well it just sucks the reader in. Can't wait to see what happens next my friend.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from c_lucas
It is surprising that with all the coverage, Earth still has come mysteries. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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It is surprising that with all the coverage, Earth still has come mysteries. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Sankey
Wow another of Mikey's weird queer tales wonder where this is going what happened to the ancient tales? Must be a diversion here I reckon.
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Wow another of Mikey's weird queer tales wonder where this is going what happened to the ancient tales? Must be a diversion here I reckon.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Actually, this sounds more like "The Amazing Adventures of Truthful Jones." This is an interesting story doused with your usual brand of fun humor. Looking forward to the rest.
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Actually, this sounds more like "The Amazing Adventures of Truthful Jones." This is an interesting story doused with your usual brand of fun humor. Looking forward to the rest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Hee-hee. Some story Mikey. Kind of hard to follow because of the vernacular. Impossible to review for SPAG because of the vernacular.
Still and all, a fun read, imaginative, creative.
That's a picture of Harry Henderson, isn't it?
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Hee-hee. Some story Mikey. Kind of hard to follow because of the vernacular. Impossible to review for SPAG because of the vernacular.
Still and all, a fun read, imaginative, creative.
That's a picture of Harry Henderson, isn't it?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Is it? I actually have never seen Harry and the Hendersons! I finally figured out a way to avoid SPAG. Write nothing but dialogue by illiterates. Clever boy. :) This is like a writer's version of going to the beach and doing nothing. mikey
