Comment from Malerie

Excellent

Cute, the picture is great; Not much to say, I enjoyed ready this, the picture made me smile. Thanks for sharing this piece.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks so much for this lovely review and great comments, blessings,

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

I love... "Four apples" This is a very apt poem you have created here, Roy. The apples fall not far from the tree. A very observant and well known phrase. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy

reply by chasennov on 02-Nov-2014

You are most welcome, Roy.

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

What a beautiful looking little bunch of apples. Are they yours? Mine are grown but they have their own little cherubs now. Thanks for an uplifting poem.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

My grandchildren and cousins, thanks for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

wonderful, and well written 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count was spot on and the art work you chose was really cute. I loved the little girl sitting off to her self. Showing she just might be pushing her independence. SMile.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you Amahra for being spot on with this review, Indah is perfectly comfortable in her own skin, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Dave Russell

Excellent

What a great little poem to express your obvious love for these little apples. Your pride brings a smile to all of us with children or grandchildren. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks again Dave, the product of much love, are these little apples, great review thank you. Blessings, Roy.

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

Hello Roy,
Well, this one brought a smile to my face. What a great bunch of kids. The little girl on the end looks precious and the boys, (brother's I presume), look like a handful, lol. You did a great job designing this piece for the prompt...hope it's a winner!
Best wishes, Bill

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks Bill for the great review, they are cousins actually, my two daughter's kids, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Very original and creative approach to the "I love" writing prompt. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

such a wonderful expression of love for your grandkids. we do all hope that they fell from the same tree, share some of our interests and traits and not very far so we can keep them close and watch them grow.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

What adorable children. I can see why they inspired you to write this poem. That darling little girl is going to be treated like a princess, assuming the boys are all her brothers. What a beautiful family. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

They're all cousins, the boys are one daughter's and my granddaughter the other daughter, but all precious, thanks Lou for the great review! Blessings, Roy.

Comment from Veeb

Excellent

This is a very sweet response to the prompt. Original without being 'cutsey'. "not very far from the tree" is a good description of family resemblance. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Thanks for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.