haiku(evil nasty things)
Contest entry (5-7-5)57 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
"Evil nasty things
pounding at my door tonight
in-laws are in town"
haha. lol. a deserved win yet again. you're on fire my friend! keep on writing like you've never written before (or because you have written before:))
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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"Evil nasty things
pounding at my door tonight
in-laws are in town"
haha. lol. a deserved win yet again. you're on fire my friend! keep on writing like you've never written before (or because you have written before:))
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you Rebekka x for the inspiring reviews that you always seem to be giving. I am very new to the writing world and am currently writing a novel. I joined this great site for two things. Inspiration which I receive daily through both the reviews and the prompts. Secondly I need the critiques to help catapult me forward and help me with editing, especially punctuations this is a weak area for me. Thank you for all of your honesty and loyalty to help those improve. God bless!
Comment from LIJ Red
A buck ten in foney money for mumbling a little about a five/seven/five that counts out right and even made me grin?
Now that's excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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A buck ten in foney money for mumbling a little about a five/seven/five that counts out right and even made me grin?
Now that's excellent.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you LIJ Red for the awesome review and I have hit the last 3 wins which to me just seems crazy. I am enjoying the ride and really wish I could make a living doing this writing thing LOL. God Bless!
Comment from Shirley B
I really enjoyed this one as well. Your humor is like mine. lol. I can see why you won the contest. Life is just better when we can laugh at the little things. Thank you for sharing your work, Shirley
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I really enjoyed this one as well. Your humor is like mine. lol. I can see why you won the contest. Life is just better when we can laugh at the little things. Thank you for sharing your work, Shirley
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you Shirley and I definitely agree with the necessity of humor. Laughter is the best medicine and I do my best to offer this as each day passes. God Bless and thank you for the awesome review.
Comment from Ninap2
Haha wow the in-laws must not be too happy about your picture. This ending was a great surprise- funny too...classic dread of the in-law's arrival. Well done. -Nina
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Haha wow the in-laws must not be too happy about your picture. This ending was a great surprise- funny too...classic dread of the in-law's arrival. Well done. -Nina
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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LOL! Thank you Nina and they are ok with my creepy sense of humor. God Bless!
Comment from acerisestory
Ha ha ha! This is a funny haiku with a perfect/surprising satori.
Ooh, I hope your in-laws aren't really "evil nasty things."
This is a fine entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Ha ha ha! This is a funny haiku with a perfect/surprising satori.
Ooh, I hope your in-laws aren't really "evil nasty things."
This is a fine entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Thank you Alana and no, they are pretty cool people. God bless!
Comment from gypsycaravan
Just finished reading all the entries. This one was the last. I was about to pass on voting because I saw nothing unusual or creative enough to vote for. Until this 5-7-5 of yours. The twist in the last line is priceless. I hope people will read all of them and cast their vote with this. Definitely the "should be the winner." I'm off to place my vote.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Just finished reading all the entries. This one was the last. I was about to pass on voting because I saw nothing unusual or creative enough to vote for. Until this 5-7-5 of yours. The twist in the last line is priceless. I hope people will read all of them and cast their vote with this. Definitely the "should be the winner." I'm off to place my vote.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Thank you gypsycaravan and it did become the winner. I am just overwhelmed with joy and my other two pieces took first as well. God Bless!
Comment from jandeck
Like lawyers and politicians, in-laws are usually good for a few laughs. Better to laugh than cry, right? This clever 5-7-5 gave me a chuckle. Thanks!
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Like lawyers and politicians, in-laws are usually good for a few laughs. Better to laugh than cry, right? This clever 5-7-5 gave me a chuckle. Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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This is true jandeck and yes laughter rocks! God Bless!
Comment from Charlene0513
This certainly does not paint a pretty picture of your thoughts but I'm sure not only you but many others feel the same way. LOL
Charlene
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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This certainly does not paint a pretty picture of your thoughts but I'm sure not only you but many others feel the same way. LOL
Charlene
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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LOL! I just wanted to make people laugh and give them a relatable twist. God Bless!
Comment from JudyS
This is an excellent entry in this contest. Great Halloween theme and perfect picture. Best of luck with it. Have a good one, Judy
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This is an excellent entry in this contest. Great Halloween theme and perfect picture. Best of luck with it. Have a good one, Judy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Thank you Judy for another inspiring review. God bless!
Comment from c_lucas
In-laws are the vane of marriage life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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In-laws are the vane of marriage life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
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Mine are great people and share the joy of this humorous piece. Thank you Lucas for the awesome review. God Bless!
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Congratulations on your win. N, Charlie
