haiku(evil nasty things)
Contest entry (5-7-5)57 total reviews
Comment from bertodi
that last line is brilliant-- it makes the whole thing-- what is it about, and how -- clear and succint, and funny!! I am sure ofcourse your in laws are lovely people, but it is a laugh-
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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that last line is brilliant-- it makes the whole thing-- what is it about, and how -- clear and succint, and funny!! I am sure ofcourse your in laws are lovely people, but it is a laugh-
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you bertodi for this inspiring review and yes my in-laws are awesome people who fortunately love my sense of humor LOL! God bless!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Now this one is worth the price of the read! I would of called the little buggers at the door the "OUT-LAWS" no love ever lost on that score I can tell you...choose your friends not your family and all that crap! Well done you! Congrats on the win. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Now this one is worth the price of the read! I would of called the little buggers at the door the "OUT-LAWS" no love ever lost on that score I can tell you...choose your friends not your family and all that crap! Well done you! Congrats on the win. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Kiwi for this wonderfully inspiring review. God bless young lady!
Comment from Dawny53
I love it! An excellent entry! Your title really is what drew me in.. who doesn't want to read about evil nasty things.. you give your readers exactly what they want with this title.. then we get a big funny surprise! Nice work, thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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I love it! An excellent entry! Your title really is what drew me in.. who doesn't want to read about evil nasty things.. you give your readers exactly what they want with this title.. then we get a big funny surprise! Nice work, thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you Dawny for the inspiring review, I have had the best time reading every ones comments on this piece. God Bless!
Comment from mermaids
Hahahaha! This is great. You surprised me with the last line. You draw the reader into the poem,thnking it is a typical Halloween poem but here,the inlaws show up. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Hahahaha! This is great. You surprised me with the last line. You draw the reader into the poem,thnking it is a typical Halloween poem but here,the inlaws show up. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the congrats mermaids. I have enjoyed every single review I have received for this piece. God Bless!
Comment from fayesh
Funny and so true! You deserved the win. This was a well written 5-7-5 Halloween poem. The accompanying artwork was scary like in-laws can be.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Funny and so true! You deserved the win. This was a well written 5-7-5 Halloween poem. The accompanying artwork was scary like in-laws can be.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Fayesh, first off I want to extend the warmest thank you ever for the exceptional star rating. I am humbled by this kind act and have had the best of success with this little piece. I was determined it would not be predictable. God bless!
Comment from angelface2
I couldn't help but laugh at this one. It was unexpected. and not all in-laws apply to this, but I thought it was hilarious. Good job. Deserves a win! Miss Sally
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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I couldn't help but laugh at this one. It was unexpected. and not all in-laws apply to this, but I thought it was hilarious. Good job. Deserves a win! Miss Sally
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Sally, my in-laws are awesome people who fortunately for me love my sense of humor. Thank you for the awesome review and God bless!
Comment from flamingstar
Are you still married?? LOL. This is very funny and your "punch line" was totally unexpected. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Are you still married?? LOL. This is very funny and your "punch line" was totally unexpected. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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LOL! Thank you Flamingstar for the awesome review and my in-laws are incredible loving people who fortunately for me love my sense of humor. God Bless!
Comment from Earthlover
What a clever little poem you created here. Very creative and witty and humorous. You added an unsuspected ending and twist to this one. You for sure deserved to win this contest. Well done~
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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What a clever little poem you created here. Very creative and witty and humorous. You added an unsuspected ending and twist to this one. You for sure deserved to win this contest. Well done~
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you Earthlover for this inspiring review. God Bless!
Comment from Acquired Taste
I really like this - so 'bloody' funny. Amazing how life imitates art!
Congratulations on the win - this is most deserved. AT=/
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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I really like this - so 'bloody' funny. Amazing how life imitates art!
Congratulations on the win - this is most deserved. AT=/
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you Acquired Taste for another inspiring review. I was definitely trying not to be predictable with this piece. The in-laws just seemed funny and relatable LOL! God Bless!
Comment from skye
Evil nasty things
pounding at my door tonight
in-laws are in town
I love it, although I would feel bad if my in-law children felt that way about me... LOL
Excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Evil nasty things
pounding at my door tonight
in-laws are in town
I love it, although I would feel bad if my in-law children felt that way about me... LOL
Excellent.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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LOL! My in-laws are actually great people and fortunately enjoy my sense of humor. I was looking for a funny twist that would be relatable. God bless!
