senryu (new Ebola rule)
Confusions reigns. In case of emergency dial a prayer.5 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
lol. Your second line echoes what I was thinking as I clicked on the title! Senryu is the perfect form for capturing the political chaos. I think your third line is the answer.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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lol. Your second line echoes what I was thinking as I clicked on the title! Senryu is the perfect form for capturing the political chaos. I think your third line is the answer.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thanks for reviewing. It seems to be the only constant.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a clever message on a very newsworthy and timely topic. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a clever message on a very newsworthy and timely topic. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thanks for reviewing
Comment from MissMerri
Excellent advice here! I think that makes perhaps more sense than anything we've heard thus far. This is a well done senryu and I did enjoy reading it, in spite of the depressing subject matter. I wish you luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Excellent advice here! I think that makes perhaps more sense than anything we've heard thus far. This is a well done senryu and I did enjoy reading it, in spite of the depressing subject matter. I wish you luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, you are entitled to your point of view , and you can certainly write what you feel. However, I found this a sad commentary on the state of ebola care. The picture is a good fit. No changes needed. Good job and good luck in the contest.
*****Please read my reply that I wrote earlier.*********
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Yes, you are entitled to your point of view , and you can certainly write what you feel. However, I found this a sad commentary on the state of ebola care. The picture is a good fit. No changes needed. Good job and good luck in the contest.
*****Please read my reply that I wrote earlier.*********
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Sorry you found it offensive. Was not my intent. It was written out of a sense of frustration at the way it is being handled, or not handled. I find it anything by humorous.
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You are right. I, too, am very upset about that very thing. Maybe I was too harsh. Please forgive me. There was nothing wrong with your words as such. I may have just been upset as I said. You are free to choose what you wish to write about. Since you replied with an explanation, I have reread your poem. I should not judge your poem based on topic. I should review based on mechanics etc. So, for that reason I have redone your stars. Please accept my apologies.
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Thanks. I have been glued to me tv till I am half nuts and the confusion and seemingly contradictions, I find to be quite scary.
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Thank you for making me a better reviewer.
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Have a great week. :.)
Comment from Neonewman
This one is definitely current and a great addition to this senryu poetry writing prompt. Everyone is in fear of this nasty disease. I believe this will help prevent the spread along with much prayer. God Bless!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This one is definitely current and a great addition to this senryu poetry writing prompt. Everyone is in fear of this nasty disease. I believe this will help prevent the spread along with much prayer. God Bless!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. How it is being handled is frustration for everyone.
