If I Could be Rapunzel
A poem for Sawyer and Chloe145 total reviews
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Ha Ha Brooke The power of a women comes across in you well written delighful poem. What a gorgeous photo of your grandson and his little friend who I'm sure is already practising her female thicks on him. Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Ha Ha Brooke The power of a women comes across in you well written delighful poem. What a gorgeous photo of your grandson and his little friend who I'm sure is already practising her female thicks on him. Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Gaye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
What an adorable picture of the two best pals, Brooke. I loved your poem and the ending made me smile. It's perfect. Your abcb rhyme is wonderful, and the enjambment gives your poem excellent flow.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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What an adorable picture of the two best pals, Brooke. I loved your poem and the ending made me smile. It's perfect. Your abcb rhyme is wonderful, and the enjambment gives your poem excellent flow.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
I don't know Brooke, really. Rapunzel and a ninja turtle? Oh well, guess it works:) Very fun to read and fun pic too.
Tereesa
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I don't know Brooke, really. Rapunzel and a ninja turtle? Oh well, guess it works:) Very fun to read and fun pic too.
Tereesa
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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He is not a Ninja Turtle - he is Buzz Lightyear, the brave astronaut from Toy Story!!! LOL Thanks so much, Teresa :-) Brooke
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Oh well that is definitely ok then lol!
Comment from rjpurdy
A wonderful, skilfull piece of writing. Not a wasted word. Your poem flows nicely with good cadence and rhythm. A fast read. The message is clear and the smoothe pace gives your voice authenticity. The best poem I have read in some time. Thank you Brooke. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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A wonderful, skilfull piece of writing. Not a wasted word. Your poem flows nicely with good cadence and rhythm. A fast read. The message is clear and the smoothe pace gives your voice authenticity. The best poem I have read in some time. Thank you Brooke. Rod
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
awe, that picture is just adorable. chloe looks so sweet and sawyer looks so attentive. I loved this poem brooke, excellent imagery presented and such truth too, lol. I chased my husband til he caught me.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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awe, that picture is just adorable. chloe looks so sweet and sawyer looks so attentive. I loved this poem brooke, excellent imagery presented and such truth too, lol. I chased my husband til he caught me.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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thank you so much, sweetwoodjax :-) Yep, that is the way many many couples ended up becoming couples LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Debbie
Oh such a sweet write with these two beautiful children. The theme write goes excellent with the picture. The flow flows evenly and the rhyme is great. Thank You for sharing this sweet little write.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Oh such a sweet write with these two beautiful children. The theme write goes excellent with the picture. The flow flows evenly and the rhyme is great. Thank You for sharing this sweet little write.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Angel Debbie :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
How sweet, Brooke. The picture is perfect for your cute little poem. Always in good form, with good rhythm and rhyming. I enjoyed reading it. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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How sweet, Brooke. The picture is perfect for your cute little poem. Always in good form, with good rhythm and rhyming. I enjoyed reading it. Miss Sally
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gladness
Great pic for your poem. Cloe looks like a real Rapunzel. : )
I like the rhyming and the storyline. It was fun to read and imagine. Sounds like you would turn away rescuers when they had the wrong answer. Wow, that's bold.
Fun poem, thanks,
Anita
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Great pic for your poem. Cloe looks like a real Rapunzel. : )
I like the rhyming and the storyline. It was fun to read and imagine. Sounds like you would turn away rescuers when they had the wrong answer. Wow, that's bold.
Fun poem, thanks,
Anita
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Anita :-) Brooke
Comment from Oatmeal
adewpearl,
All things are moving effectively, nice and full of flashy impressions, well expressed. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Good atmosphere and thrilling emotions.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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adewpearl,
All things are moving effectively, nice and full of flashy impressions, well expressed. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Good atmosphere and thrilling emotions.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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thank you for reviewing, Oatmeal :-) Brooke
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adewpearl,
You are very welcome.
Love you,
Camille
Comment from words
Such a beautifully wise and romantic poem.
You are so right, men do love to strutt and preen for the women in their lives.
I so admire your skill and depth . So, pleased that it is Sunday and I have a quivr full of stars to light this one up.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Such a beautifully wise and romantic poem.
You are so right, men do love to strutt and preen for the women in their lives.
I so admire your skill and depth . So, pleased that it is Sunday and I have a quivr full of stars to light this one up.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Diane, thank you so very much, my generous and insightful friend :-) Brooke
