If I Could be Rapunzel
A poem for Sawyer and Chloe145 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Brilliant! I can't wait to share this with my seven year old niece, she will absolutely adore it. She is forever my little princess and every year for Halloween she is anyone of the given story book princesses. God bless!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Brilliant! I can't wait to share this with my seven year old niece, she will absolutely adore it. She is forever my little princess and every year for Halloween she is anyone of the given story book princesses. God bless!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Neonewman, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem - she sounds adorable :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
My morning is complete now.She is beautiful and that Sawyer is snared by it .Great one this time too, Grandmother. Great photo.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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My morning is complete now.She is beautiful and that Sawyer is snared by it .Great one this time too, Grandmother. Great photo.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Ben, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawny53
Wonderful poem! This photograph is just to good to be true.. it almost looks as if the are posing, but children don't usually pose so well, do they? This is just adorable!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Wonderful poem! This photograph is just to good to be true.. it almost looks as if the are posing, but children don't usually pose so well, do they? This is just adorable!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Dawny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Aletheia
This poem needs to be made into a huge billboard that runs across the universe, so ALL women can read it! I wrote another poem once (that I am going to dig up now) with the same exact message but not nearly as eloquent. Words truly can not express how much your poem resonated with my own personal philosophy. Right on, Brooke. Love it! Such a darling pic too. Enjoy. :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This poem needs to be made into a huge billboard that runs across the universe, so ALL women can read it! I wrote another poem once (that I am going to dig up now) with the same exact message but not nearly as eloquent. Words truly can not express how much your poem resonated with my own personal philosophy. Right on, Brooke. Love it! Such a darling pic too. Enjoy. :)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Begonia, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your encouraging comments and your generous six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from rod007
This is a great and your elevation of women is supreme in the lines below I especially like:
"for men must all feel useful
though we, the women, know,
our power is within us -
the rescue's just for show."
Power to thee. Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This is a great and your elevation of women is supreme in the lines below I especially like:
"for men must all feel useful
though we, the women, know,
our power is within us -
the rescue's just for show."
Power to thee. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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rod, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
The picture says it all, Brooke! Well, maybe not ALL, but that Sawyer is so darn cute!
Yours is a sweet and, once again, thoughtful write. It flows beautifully. Your rhyming is perfect. I love "duke it out." I especially like this telling stanza:
"for men must all feel useful
though we, the women, know,
our power is within us -
the rescue's just for show."
Well done, my friend! Alana
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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The picture says it all, Brooke! Well, maybe not ALL, but that Sawyer is so darn cute!
Yours is a sweet and, once again, thoughtful write. It flows beautifully. Your rhyming is perfect. I love "duke it out." I especially like this telling stanza:
"for men must all feel useful
though we, the women, know,
our power is within us -
the rescue's just for show."
Well done, my friend! Alana
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Alana :-) Brooke
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
The picture is simply astonishing with the expressions of innocents & youth as the poem is a youthful one of vim & valor that all little girls crave & all little boys wish to fulfill on that little-grand stage.
Six light hearted stanzas of ending couplet rhymes.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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The picture is simply astonishing with the expressions of innocents & youth as the poem is a youthful one of vim & valor that all little girls crave & all little boys wish to fulfill on that little-grand stage.
Six light hearted stanzas of ending couplet rhymes.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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giovanni, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Comment from donnadiann
Nice gentle romantic voice throughout. Charming little couple, and cute costumes. The flow of the story in this poem is interesting--holds you to the last word. Good rhyming and lovely photo:) Also confident voice of the narrator.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Nice gentle romantic voice throughout. Charming little couple, and cute costumes. The flow of the story in this poem is interesting--holds you to the last word. Good rhyming and lovely photo:) Also confident voice of the narrator.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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donnadiann, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Such great wit in this and so true as it applies to human nature. All men are firefighters at heart, climbing ladders of hair. And the fire within her knows she doesn't need saving.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Such great wit in this and so true as it applies to human nature. All men are firefighters at heart, climbing ladders of hair. And the fire within her knows she doesn't need saving.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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ravenblack, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Benny Beeharry
There is no doubt about it you will find him.
Very well written .simple full of emotion and sincerity which goes to the heart.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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There is no doubt about it you will find him.
Very well written .simple full of emotion and sincerity which goes to the heart.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Benny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
