If I Could be Rapunzel
A poem for Sawyer and Chloe145 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Ha, that was funny. Once upon a time the early Disney all had the same theme, a princess needing a man to save her. All that has changed recently, and now the princess is the hero. Great work.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Ha, that was funny. Once upon a time the early Disney all had the same theme, a princess needing a man to save her. All that has changed recently, and now the princess is the hero. Great work.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
Wow, Halloween fair so soon? I think that may be good. Halloween is now kind of dangerous for little kiddies. It's good to do something for the little ones before Halloween. Great poem and great costumes.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Wow, Halloween fair so soon? I think that may be good. Halloween is now kind of dangerous for little kiddies. It's good to do something for the little ones before Halloween. Great poem and great costumes.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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On actual Halloween they will have their class parties, but yes, this was the day of the school fair. For the first time in her life Miranda baked for a bake sale. My little girl and her little boy are both growing up. LOL Thanks so much, amahra :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
If could be Rapunzel. That's a beautiful Picture of Sawyer and Chioe, that's a very lovely story poem.Nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
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If could be Rapunzel. That's a beautiful Picture of Sawyer and Chioe, that's a very lovely story poem.Nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Erich, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome.Hug!lakeport.
Comment from Drew Delaney
What a sweet picture of the two children! I think you did a wonderful job as usual with the poem. It worked so well and with awesome rhyme and rhythm. Words were well chosen for this cute poem.
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What a sweet picture of the two children! I think you did a wonderful job as usual with the poem. It worked so well and with awesome rhyme and rhythm. Words were well chosen for this cute poem.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Drew :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Awww - Darned smart, that Rapunzel would be too.
This is a good story for children, and teaches them about love and relationships in a healthy, kind way. It's a little old fashioned in its ideals, which suits me just fine.
Nice 7/6/7/6 meter in this not-so-make-believe Halloween romance.
Rose.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Awww - Darned smart, that Rapunzel would be too.
This is a good story for children, and teaches them about love and relationships in a healthy, kind way. It's a little old fashioned in its ideals, which suits me just fine.
Nice 7/6/7/6 meter in this not-so-make-believe Halloween romance.
Rose.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Rose - I have such great pictures of our little couple holding hands and giving each other soulful looks all day long. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brooke fantastic poem based on the Grimm brothers fairy tale, Great rhyming and rhythm, and wonderful imagery, that is a wonderful picture of Sawyer at his halloween fair.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke fantastic poem based on the Grimm brothers fairy tale, Great rhyming and rhythm, and wonderful imagery, that is a wonderful picture of Sawyer at his halloween fair.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Eric, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome Brooke.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Yes Brook thanks to your daughter for the wonderful photo and for you coming up with the words especially this part--
is perfect
for men must all feel useful
though we, the women, know,
our power is within us -
the rescue's just for show.
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Yes Brook thanks to your daughter for the wonderful photo and for you coming up with the words especially this part--
is perfect
for men must all feel useful
though we, the women, know,
our power is within us -
the rescue's just for show.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Gert, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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smiles
Gert
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is just adorable Brooke. What a beautiful picture of the two. He looks absolutely taken by Chloe doesn't he? I love
the last two stanzas! It is a secret all real women know. LOL Good job Brooke. I enjoyed it very much. Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This is just adorable Brooke. What a beautiful picture of the two. He looks absolutely taken by Chloe doesn't he? I love
the last two stanzas! It is a secret all real women know. LOL Good job Brooke. I enjoyed it very much. Nancy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Nancy - when they met a year ago, she was clearly the pursuer, the initiator of all touches. Now he is just as likely to lay a kiss on her cheek or to reach out to hold her hand. I've never seen anything like it. :-) Brooke
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They are so cute at that age. LOL
Comment from RodG
This is a poem children and their mothers would love, Brooke. I love how you gently reproach us men (boys) for thinking "might" wows and wins a woman's heart. The Speaker is shrewd in how she plays a waiting game, and then allows her suitor to think he's won. I wonder if the real Repunzel was as clever.
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This is a poem children and their mothers would love, Brooke. I love how you gently reproach us men (boys) for thinking "might" wows and wins a woman's heart. The Speaker is shrewd in how she plays a waiting game, and then allows her suitor to think he's won. I wonder if the real Repunzel was as clever.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Rod :-) Brooke
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
You are a prolific and eloquent word smith. I this this is a sentiment I've heard many times but never so eloquently put and with such economic word choice.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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You are a prolific and eloquent word smith. I this this is a sentiment I've heard many times but never so eloquently put and with such economic word choice.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Lighthouse Keeper, thank you so much :-) Brooke
