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haiku (virgin sands give birth)

Contest entry (5-7-5)

80 total reviews 
Comment from TAB_that's me
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There is beautiful imagery in your simple island haiku. Great art work as well. Good luck to you in the contest.
~teresa~

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Teresa for another awesome and inspiring review.
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    God Bless!
Comment from Ben Colder
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Now this is interesting. Good contest piece. Trespassers allowed. Better bring the store. Good luck to you in the finals.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you as always Ben Colder. I thoroughly enjoy receiving your awesome reviews.
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    God Bless!
reply by Ben Colder on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you. I am voting today. Mine is there on caves Tunnel of love if you care to read.
Comment from Charlene0513
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A Haiku poem very well expressed with great imagery and a divine place for newlyweds.
Good mention of satori:"virgin sands give birth"
Charlene

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Charlene for the awesome review.
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    God Bless!
Comment from livelylinda
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Author: I looked at the picture, felt the sun on my face and heard the ocean's lullaby. Then, I realized there wasn't any chocolate there and decided not to move.

Yours words are original and fresh, the theme one of rejuvenation and hopefulness. Very nicely done and a good contest contender. livelylinda

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you livelylinda for the awesome review. I guess I forgot to mention that the coconuts are chocolate coated LOL!
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    God Bless!
Comment from mjac777
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Very good haiku for this contest entry.
Good imagery: virgin sands, sprouting life -
and the satisfying satori line - inviting us the partake of it's pleasures.
Good luck in the contest - this is surely a strong contender.
Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you mjac777 for a most inspiring review and generous stars.
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    God Bless!
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi author I like your little haiku style poem about a virgin sands giving birth to an island. It's an unusual concept! Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Wendyanne for another inspiring review with generous stars. I enjoyed writing this piece and let my mind take me there for an instant.
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    God Bless!
Comment from emrpoems
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virgin sands give birth
to small island sprouting life
trespassing allowed

Unique entry for the contest
Stunning presentation
Perfect syllable count for the prompt
Best of luck

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you emrpoems for the inspiring review and generous stars.
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    God bless!
reply by emrpoems on 27-Oct-2014
    I voted for you.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the confidence in this piece. God bless!
Comment from thee-name
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Good Haiku. Nice and peaceful writing about a small island.
VIRGIN SANDS GIVE BIRTH
TO SMALL ISLAND SPROUTING LIFE
TRESPASSING ALLOWED

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Thee-name for another awesome review, I always enjoy reading your feedback.
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    God bless!
reply by thee-name on 28-Oct-2014
    THANK YOU!
Comment from amada
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Lovely, very lovely. I smiled at the last line, the satori line. Your work has a delicate touch of fantasy and humor. Great combination. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Amada for another awesome review. I always enjoy your kind words.
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    God Bless!
Comment from Eric1
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This is a wonderful entry for this particular competition, beautifully chosen word with a stunning picture to lift it even higher, good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank your Eric, I always look forward to reading your reviews.
    The poles are open for voting if you desire to do so.
    God bless!
reply by Eric1 on 27-Oct-2014
    You are very welcome, I am now off to vote,