haiku (virgin sands give birth)
Contest entry (5-7-5)80 total reviews
Comment from skye
virgin sands give birth
to small island sprouting life
trespassing allowed
Congratulations on a terific win! You captured the essence of an island.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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virgin sands give birth
to small island sprouting life
trespassing allowed
Congratulations on a terific win! You captured the essence of an island.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Skye, I always appreciate your great reviews. God Bless!
Comment from royowen
A great entry in this haiku-island poetry contest, I love the combination of the artwork, with it's image projecting feelings of well being and the poem was excellent, good satori, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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A great entry in this haiku-island poetry contest, I love the combination of the artwork, with it's image projecting feelings of well being and the poem was excellent, good satori, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Roy, the voting has been open all day and I seen to be fairing pretty well. God bless!
Comment from JudyS
This is a very enjoyable and soothing read. It's an excellent entry to the contest. Your choice of photo's is perfect. Best of luck. Judy
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This is a very enjoyable and soothing read. It's an excellent entry to the contest. Your choice of photo's is perfect. Best of luck. Judy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Judy for the awesome review. God bless!
Comment from PatVallesMangan
All of the writing prompts have well been met. I love the description followed by "trespassing allowed!" This is a beautiful picture and a lovely 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest! Blessings! ~ Pat
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All of the writing prompts have well been met. I love the description followed by "trespassing allowed!" This is a beautiful picture and a lovely 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest! Blessings! ~ Pat
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Pat for another awesome review and generous stars. I so loved writing this piece and am humbled by all of the reviews.
If you desire to vote, the poles are still open.
God bless!
Comment from rjpurdy
Delicious! The invitation is exquisite. The presentation even more so. So much said in so few words. The very thought. To be part of the new generation of life. Just beautiful. rj
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Delicious! The invitation is exquisite. The presentation even more so. So much said in so few words. The very thought. To be part of the new generation of life. Just beautiful. rj
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you RJ for this most inspiring review. I love how these little islands just pop up from earthquakes or volcano's.
The voting booths are still open if you desire to vote.
God Bless!
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I must tell you, and I say this without judgement, while I am happy to vote for you, or another, soliciting votes devalues the very grip of your amazing art. Let the chips fall where they may. ~Peace & Grace~ rj
Comment from RGstar
I wish I could trespass for a week or two.
Lovely image and a lovely write in putting forward your thesis.
On the mention of 'virgin Islands' I thought of Gungalo. God rest her soul.
Lovely write.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes,
RGstar
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I wish I could trespass for a week or two.
Lovely image and a lovely write in putting forward your thesis.
On the mention of 'virgin Islands' I thought of Gungalo. God rest her soul.
Lovely write.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the most inspiring review RGstar. I came after Gungalo's passing, never had the chance to review her work.
The voting booth is still open if you choose to vote.
God Bless!
Comment from bhogg
Looks to me like correct format and syllable count. The artwork is certainly appropriate to the post. Caused me to stop and reflect how I'd like to be on that island today! Bill
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Looks to me like correct format and syllable count. The artwork is certainly appropriate to the post. Caused me to stop and reflect how I'd like to be on that island today! Bill
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Awesome! Thank you Bill for this excellent review and generous star count. I appreciate all the support I have had with this one.
The poles are open for voting if you desire to do so.
God bless!
Comment from gazzagodbod
wonderful little iyllic island in the picture and love the new life in your few wonderful words had to be a big sixer xxgazzaxx
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wonderful little iyllic island in the picture and love the new life in your few wonderful words had to be a big sixer xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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A big old bear hug and thank you for the sixer Gazza, I appreciated this exceptional review and I am honored that you enjoyed this piece.
The poles are open for voting if you desire to do so.
God Bless!
Comment from lakeport
virgin sands give birth, that's a beautiful picture, that's a wonderful expressed Haiku poem, good luck at the contest.
I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakepoer.
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virgin sands give birth, that's a beautiful picture, that's a wonderful expressed Haiku poem, good luck at the contest.
I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakepoer.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you again my friend lakeport for another awesome review.
The poles are open for voting is you desire to do so.
God bless!
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your welcome,Lakport.
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your welome.Lakeport.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Poet,
I really enjoyed your haiku-island poem. In this tiny poem, just a few words, (which, by the way, are in perfect 5-7-5 syllable count), you give four periods of life. First, the sands gather together in the middle of an ocean. (I like your description of the sands, "virgin".) Second, the sand eventually forms an island. Third, the small island sprouts life, palm trees, shade to weary (and fourth period) shipwrecked souls, like Robbie Crusoe, cannibals, and Gilligan & company.
http://youtu.be/ac1OvqiZmh0
A great entry for this contest, and I wish you lots of luck!
cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Hi Mystery Poet,
I really enjoyed your haiku-island poem. In this tiny poem, just a few words, (which, by the way, are in perfect 5-7-5 syllable count), you give four periods of life. First, the sands gather together in the middle of an ocean. (I like your description of the sands, "virgin".) Second, the sand eventually forms an island. Third, the small island sprouts life, palm trees, shade to weary (and fourth period) shipwrecked souls, like Robbie Crusoe, cannibals, and Gilligan & company.
http://youtu.be/ac1OvqiZmh0
A great entry for this contest, and I wish you lots of luck!
cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Farther Flaps for this most inspiring review and feedback. I appreciate the support and you are spot on with your analogy. The virgin sand becomes the womb for the life that grows as well as a virgin to the first steps by animal or man.
The poles are open for voting if you desire to do so.
God bless!
