Tell me where you'll be?
A love song.87 total reviews
Comment from marijmd
What a happy painting - often all religious art is depicting suffering - I like the happiness of your poem that joy is present.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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What a happy painting - often all religious art is depicting suffering - I like the happiness of your poem that joy is present.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for these kind words and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from rjuselius
i love biblical poems! and not just because i believe but because i always learn something new. your poem is an exquisite piece of poetic art!
thank you for sharing dear roy!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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i love biblical poems! and not just because i believe but because i always learn something new. your poem is an exquisite piece of poetic art!
thank you for sharing dear roy!
rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Rebekka for upbeat, encouraging words, and most welcome stars, bless you, Roy.
Comment from mjac777
Excellent poem about faith through the prism of a sincere, practicing Christian.
It evokes images of a young King David singing psalms to God's glory whilst watching over the sheep.
This aa/bb rhythm flows nicely and stately. It would sound lovely set to music and sung as a hymn.
Beautifully done, friend.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Excellent poem about faith through the prism of a sincere, practicing Christian.
It evokes images of a young King David singing psalms to God's glory whilst watching over the sheep.
This aa/bb rhythm flows nicely and stately. It would sound lovely set to music and sung as a hymn.
Beautifully done, friend.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for this most empathetic and kind, generous review and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Beautifully constructed and well written. Even without a tune this write
sings. A most enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Beautifully constructed and well written. Even without a tune this write
sings. A most enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Robin for these most generous, upbeat and gracious comments and review and great stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from tfawcus
A stirring song with all the qualities of an uplifting hymn. It would be interesting to hear it set to music. The rhythm and the positive framework of the words give it a joyous sense.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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A stirring song with all the qualities of an uplifting hymn. It would be interesting to hear it set to music. The rhythm and the positive framework of the words give it a joyous sense.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Tony, for the encouraging review, comments and gracious, I'm not sure how the melody goes now, that can be fixed, I sung it in a couple of places, I thought it doubled well as a poem! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Emily George
A hymn or psalm really and very beautiful.
I liked that you kept the refrain as
Tell me where you'll be
GIVING the reader the opportunity to decide for themselves, by that I mean it made me ponder on by beliefs and where I thought I might be. Where I am now on my faith journey.
I loved this Roy.You managed to create an open ended song/hymn
That wasn't preachy.
Sorry I have no sixes, it is six worthy.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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A hymn or psalm really and very beautiful.
I liked that you kept the refrain as
Tell me where you'll be
GIVING the reader the opportunity to decide for themselves, by that I mean it made me ponder on by beliefs and where I thought I might be. Where I am now on my faith journey.
I loved this Roy.You managed to create an open ended song/hymn
That wasn't preachy.
Sorry I have no sixes, it is six worthy.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Emily, your approval is enough, I'm so glad you liked it, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Cbrand
It is wonderfully written. The rhymes are great and it flows beautifully. Great job. I am not familiar with writing a song, butI do like the poem.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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It is wonderfully written. The rhymes are great and it flows beautifully. Great job. I am not familiar with writing a song, butI do like the poem.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from JudyS
Roy, This is a lovely poem and song. I really enjoyed reading it and trying to sing along. Not that I can sing. Excellent writing on this one. Judy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Roy, This is a lovely poem and song. I really enjoyed reading it and trying to sing along. Not that I can sing. Excellent writing on this one. Judy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks Judy, for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from skye
What an inspiring poem, song, words to live by. You captured the whole message our Savior has for us. He is there always. All we have to do is choose.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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What an inspiring poem, song, words to live by. You captured the whole message our Savior has for us. He is there always. All we have to do is choose.
Excellent.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Skye, for the wonderful review, I'm pleased you liked it, blessings, Roy.
Comment from onebrit
Thats a very nice picture, I like the white bird in the background, very symbolic! I am not a believer, but can tell that you are, it comes through in every line. Its a nice piece.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thats a very nice picture, I like the white bird in the background, very symbolic! I am not a believer, but can tell that you are, it comes through in every line. Its a nice piece.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
