Tell me where you'll be?
A love song.87 total reviews
Comment from emjaihammond
How wonderful this song/poem of yours is to read. You manage to put together a beautiful song concerning the saving grace of our Lord. I loved having the opportunity to read such a meaningful, well written piece.
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How wonderful this song/poem of yours is to read. You manage to put together a beautiful song concerning the saving grace of our Lord. I loved having the opportunity to read such a meaningful, well written piece.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you for this wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from manicblue
It breaks my heart to look out at mankind's failings and see such a negative response to His teachings and words of love. Your poem captured so much. This stood out: "His grace and love that's free". How true this is. What a beautiful poem...we should all pray to be living examples of His divine teachings, and to live in love and light.
Lucretia xoxo
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It breaks my heart to look out at mankind's failings and see such a negative response to His teachings and words of love. Your poem captured so much. This stood out: "His grace and love that's free". How true this is. What a beautiful poem...we should all pray to be living examples of His divine teachings, and to live in love and light.
Lucretia xoxo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much for this wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from kiwijenny
If you could hear Him whisper, His gentle words of grace,
How much He longs to free you, and meet Him face to face.
But I can only tell you, and pray that you will see,
That one day you will hear Him, in Jesus' presence be.
3rd. Chorus-Tell me where you'll be, will you be the saviour's friend?
Tell me where you'll be, have a life that never ends?
I love this and wish I had a six
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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If you could hear Him whisper, His gentle words of grace,
How much He longs to free you, and meet Him face to face.
But I can only tell you, and pray that you will see,
That one day you will hear Him, in Jesus' presence be.
3rd. Chorus-Tell me where you'll be, will you be the saviour's friend?
Tell me where you'll be, have a life that never ends?
I love this and wish I had a six
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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You approval is enough Jenny, thanks for this beautiful review and stars, blessings, Roy
Comment from LIJ Red
A song of faith that is easy to read, smoothly written,
and consistent with this writer's veiwpoint, of which he leaves no doubt! Excellent.
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A song of faith that is easy to read, smoothly written,
and consistent with this writer's veiwpoint, of which he leaves no doubt! Excellent.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review and comments blessings Roy.
Comment from RGstar
Another great poem, song, Roy.
Your faith unwavering, you follow through with conviction. Perhaps you will collect a number and put together a collection for of poetry for your congregation.
I would like to hear the tune.
Keep the faith, my friend.
My best wishes,
RGstar
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Another great poem, song, Roy.
Your faith unwavering, you follow through with conviction. Perhaps you will collect a number and put together a collection for of poetry for your congregation.
I would like to hear the tune.
Keep the faith, my friend.
My best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you RG thanks for the advice, I think I left that career behind me sometime ago, but you never know, thanks for the the encouragement and review. Have you published your stuff? it is certainly worthy of it! I would love to read a collection of it, you're a great example of expansive poetic works! Bless you, my friend. Roy.
Comment from nomi338
This sprit filled song/poem is an excellent call tp avknowledge the blessings of God's great love and the love of His dear son, our savior Jesus Christ. Great job.
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This sprit filled song/poem is an excellent call tp avknowledge the blessings of God's great love and the love of His dear son, our savior Jesus Christ. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you to this lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from dennis4242
I Love poems about Jesus who saves. The poem was written very well and I have nothing to critique except to say I liked it. Good going!!
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I Love poems about Jesus who saves. The poem was written very well and I have nothing to critique except to say I liked it. Good going!!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Dennis, your support is welcome, and most appreciated, the review is inspiring and the stars are great, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TAB_that's me
If every faith poem you wrote roy would open just one heart to know the Lord, oh my how sweet that would be. Wonderfully worded poem from the scriptures.
Teresa
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If every faith poem you wrote roy would open just one heart to know the Lord, oh my how sweet that would be. Wonderfully worded poem from the scriptures.
Teresa
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Teresa, one salvaged soul would be worth all the poetry that was ever written, thank you for this beautiful review, Teresa my friend, blessings, Roy.
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Yes it would be:)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is really beautiful in its lyrical and graceful construction. The words are inspiring and extremely elevating. I can hear this accompanied by flute and guitar in the reading. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This is really beautiful in its lyrical and graceful construction. The words are inspiring and extremely elevating. I can hear this accompanied by flute and guitar in the reading. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you my friend, you are always such an encouraging angel, as is your inspiring poetry! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Charlene0513
To royowen,
Beautiful written lyrics that express the sole purpose of living and being with God.
I enjoyed your choruses, as it makes you stand back and think just really where would we be without Jesus in our lives.
Charlene
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To royowen,
Beautiful written lyrics that express the sole purpose of living and being with God.
I enjoyed your choruses, as it makes you stand back and think just really where would we be without Jesus in our lives.
Charlene
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thanks Charlene for your great encouragement and inspiring review and comments, blessings, Roy.
