Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Plans, More Plans and Romance"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from Sankey
Ha! Was I pre-anticipating some romance as I mentioned it in my last review I thought hehe. Another great chapter mate. Thanks again. Now a comment not a spag ok...
I loved this expression of yours..."He horsed the carriage"
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Ha! Was I pre-anticipating some romance as I mentioned it in my last review I thought hehe. Another great chapter mate. Thanks again. Now a comment not a spag ok...
I loved this expression of yours..."He horsed the carriage"
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
Comment from gypsycaravan
Oh, my goodness. Now we have a romance brewing. I hope Leopold doesn't come charging in to kill Julia and Florentina. More wrong and deaths can be attributed to religion than most wars. Great story-telling, mikey.
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Oh, my goodness. Now we have a romance brewing. I hope Leopold doesn't come charging in to kill Julia and Florentina. More wrong and deaths can be attributed to religion than most wars. Great story-telling, mikey.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
No errors and enjoyable, Mikey. Not much more I can offer. Sorry.
A lot of 'son', but it actually works well, as it strengthens the character through his way of speaking.
Why did I say that? Oh dear. I shouldn't have blurted that out... -- Good!
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No errors and enjoyable, Mikey. Not much more I can offer. Sorry.
A lot of 'son', but it actually works well, as it strengthens the character through his way of speaking.
Why did I say that? Oh dear. I shouldn't have blurted that out... -- Good!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
This is taking some intriguing twists, with the Bishop's visit. Mikey, did you research this period? I'd be curious to know your sources -- only because of the authentic "feel" of your book.
but the smiled disappeared [but the SMILE disappeared.]
Interesting! I'd have thought Cassius to be much too young to have a romantic interest in Lourdes. This was probably just a misperception on my part.
Great addition, Mikey.
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This is taking some intriguing twists, with the Bishop's visit. Mikey, did you research this period? I'd be curious to know your sources -- only because of the authentic "feel" of your book.
but the smiled disappeared [but the SMILE disappeared.]
Interesting! I'd have thought Cassius to be much too young to have a romantic interest in Lourdes. This was probably just a misperception on my part.
Great addition, Mikey.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
Comment from Sasha
Excellent chapter. Leopold continues to worry me. I fear he is going to take things into his own hands and do something terrible. I do hope I am wrong. I like the addition of love into the story. I look forward to the young couple getting to know each other better.
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Excellent chapter. Leopold continues to worry me. I fear he is going to take things into his own hands and do something terrible. I do hope I am wrong. I like the addition of love into the story. I look forward to the young couple getting to know each other better.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
