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Family visits next week.

A poem, free style.

28 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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Seventeen years is such a long time not to have seen family members. I hope your reunion is without "bombs and fireworks"--maybe, just a few sparklers! Here's to "jumping mid-air!! Many hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a good and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from Treischel
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Family gatherings can often be very stressfull. It frequently helps to write about things causing anxiety. I how this free verse poem does that for you.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a good and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from Ronni
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Family meetings of long years not seen or communicated
with on a frequent basis, can be risky and touch and go.
Hopefully, it will go off smoothly, and not be as bad
as feared. Think positive about it, and it may well be
quite ok after all. Best wishes... Ronni

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a good and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from amada
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I hope the visit goes well. Maybe the tempers, on both sides, had mellowed a little. Best of luck and I hope the hours run ... fast.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a good and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from misscookie
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I love the artwork you choose for with your poem
I thought it was mighty cute.
I remember those days it seems so long ago.
Oh how I wished they never end.
those were very happy days with all the fuss.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a good and blessed Sunday, Ine.
reply by misscookie on 26-Oct-2014
    you're very. Have a blessed Sunday.
    Cookie
reply by misscookie on 26-Oct-2014
    you're very. Have a blessed Sunday.
    Cookie
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
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Hi Ine,

I can imagine it causes you anxiety to see someone back after more than 17 years and meeting his son you have never seen. Nice picture chosen.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Ine
Just be yourself, don't allow yourself to get upset it is not worth it, Life is too short, and your are the Adult.

I hope all goes well with the visit.
Mary

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.
Comment from Bryana
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You will be very happy to see them and
they also will be glad to you.
Don't get nervous, I'm sure it will be
a happy reunion.
Your poem is lovely.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.
Comment from seaglass
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Not fair! You didn't tell us if it turned out bad or good. Everyone has relatives and acquaintances, who's visit causes anxiety. Usually these things turn out better than we expect.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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I think we all have some measure of anxiety over visitors period no matter who they are. Good way to vent and as to the style, theme, grammar ect. of this piece, well it read easily, clearly understood and has a jaunty little flow to it. Well done. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.