Comment from michael mcintosh

Excellent

the poem was well written and well thought out,I like the whole concept of this poem.This is my first time reading poetry by Dean Kuch.I will look forward to more of his work.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Michael. I am very pleased that you gave it a go, and I sincerely appreciate your gracious review. :}

Comment from emjaihammond

Exceptional

In true Dean Kuch style, as always it is sooo entertaining. Spooky good. Your work is always well done and never boring and I never get tired of seeing how you decide to present it to us.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thank you, emjaihaamond, that's very kind of you to say. I do try my best to give the reader the most bang for their time, and will continue to do so as long as there are gracious people like yourself who care to read what I put "out there."

Again, I sincerely appreciate your awesoime comments and review. :}

Comment from Smoothiecool

Exceptional

your very talented choice of words allow the reader to see and feel the mayhem in the lab and the mortician now in care

good visual

good enjambment through sentences to allow flow

good AA/BB rhyme through out verses

good use of "I" "O" assonance

horror writes are definitely your genre

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Smoothiecool, I'm so very pleased that you feel that way.

As always, I appreciate your support of what it is I try to do here on FS, and I'm very grateful for your review and outstanding rating.

Dean :}

reply by Smoothiecool on 30-Oct-2014

most welcome, Dean
well deserved six....SC

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

Hello Dean,
I must say I enjoyed the imagery in this dance-of-the-corpses. That scene would leave anyone babbling to themselves...yikes! Lol.
Loved the solid meter and rhyme you used to enhance the read, well done.
I wish you luck with this engaging entry, Bill

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Bill. I appreciate your encouraging review, my friend. :}

Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Dean - well written and constructed. An unusual but very appropriate presentation. Very easy to read in rhyming quatrains. Good luck in your contest. Bill

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks, Bill! I'm glad you liked it. :}

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

There is a fascination to horrors and their kin but what are they in this piece? Yes our minds are made up of our past. But our past with all its memories is dead. Therefore our minds with all its ghostly contents are dead. And that is the tragedy of our lives. Tell me I've got it all wrong.
-Ekim777

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

I wouldn't try to alter your opinions concerning any of your beliefs, Kim. We are all entitled to believe -- or not -- as we so choose. Therefore, that being said, I would never tell you that you are wrong, or alter your opinions and beliefs in any way.

I'm sure you would do the same for anyone, including me...wouldn't you?

Thanks...

Comment from lazar051699

Good

Great Halloween themed poem - I read this just in time to get spooked out for the holiday! Love the image of all these cadavers dancing around - driving the mortician out to the streets!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks. If it's so great, then why the four star rating? No helpful comments for improvement, no explanation for withholding at least the fifth star?

Curious...

Just sayin'...but thanks, just the same.

Comment from dennis4242

Exceptional

Loved that Halloween poem. I do like horror stories and to me you did that very well. I cannot wait to se what you might come up with next time. Good Job!!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Dennis. I really appreciate your outstanding rating and review, my friend. :}

Comment from lindalcreel

Exceptional

I can always count on you to bring a smile to my face. I love that you have such an active imagination. I think horror is definitely your genre and you should stick to it. This poem was another indication of your talent.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Linda. I really appreciate your outstanding rating and review, my friend. :}

Dean~

reply by lindalcreel on 29-Oct-2014

It's always a pleasure:)

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

reading down this piece cloaked in dark dean smiling very beautifully crafted love how it pulled me into the last breath excellent pen dear friend

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thanks, Liam, my dark friend (although here lately, you haven't been too dark, LOL!). I really appreciate your gracious comments. :}