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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from Cajungirl
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Blaze stood her ground on the girl-on-girl action old Luke wanted. I sure wouldn't want to have a lawyer like Lorna helping me. LOL

Great chapter very well-written and as always enjoyable.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you so much, Vergie. :)
reply by Cajungirl on 28-Oct-2014
    you are welcome
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Poor Luke. If someone donated a few brain cells, do you think he could learn something? LOL Wonder what would have happened if some disgusting creep had tried to grope 'Lorna.' It would have been funny to give him a dose of his own medicine.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
    LOL! What a great idea, Cindy... wish I had thought of it.
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Hi Phyllis,

I'm glad Blaze doesn't want to be intimate with Luke anymore. He's even grosser in his female body. Glad he's not going to stay in lawyer's body.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you so much, Lou. That lawyer will be able to help Blaze in her new assignment. :)
Comment from judiverse
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This is great! There's no stopping Luke, even in the woman's body. He's so self-centered he thinks Blaze sent him the female lawyer just for the new sensation it would give her. Blaze is repulsed when he makes a womanly play for her. She sent the woman hoping that would prevent Luke from making another play for her, although she had been more than willing not long ago. Luke reminds Blaze how easily she can be replaced. Same as it was with Ginger, he's one hard guy to work for! I enjoyed the reactions of Blaze ahd Luke in this one. judi

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you so verrry much for the sixer, Judi. Glad you enjoyed the scene. :)
reply by judiverse on 27-Oct-2014
    Hi, Phyllis. You're so welcome. Luke just can't let it go, whether in a male or female body. Have to feel sorry for Blaze having to work for him. judi
Comment from ravenblack
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Poor Luke- in a way , he was on the verge of fulfilling just about every man's fantasy- a threesome. He (in spirit), the lawyer and Blaze. And now back to the robo-suit. Poor Luke.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you so much, Ed. I guess you guys can relate to his desire and his disappointment. LOL! :)
Comment from Spitfire
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splendid last line on this. What a hoot! The lesbian encounter. Will we find out what the lawyer did to invite Satan to be her host?

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks a bunch, Shari. The lawyer will be in the story for a while to help Blaze with her first assignment... and Blaze is NOT just doing this job for Luke, tho she pretends she is, even to herself. :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
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Good job, Phyllis. You put him in his tracks. LOL

The story is an on going type of story. It could last forever, with the evil one jumping bodies. Scary too. It could be for real when I hear of all the evil going on in the world. You never know. well done, my friend.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you so much, Drew. Yes, I suppose it could, like a soap opera. I have had fun with these books (this is the 3rd and last) but have to stop or I'll forget how to write "normal" novels, and I've already started one.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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You sure know how to keep a story interesting and open up our hidden curiosities, those that we would be better off keeping suppressed. Thanks for another fun chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    LOL! Sorry if I gave you any new fantasies. I'm sure you aren't likely to act on any, tho. Only a jerk like Luke would think that was perfectly fine. :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am liking Blaze more and more and am disliking Luke more and more. I hope Blaze has a happy ending. I think that would be good.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thanks so much, Barbara. I'm glad to hear it. Blaze will turn against Luke in this book. :)
Comment from nancyjam
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I like Blaze put Luke in his place. She's got a power
over him and he doesn't even realize it.
Should be interesting to see what she does up on earth.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Very astute of you to see that, Nancy. Thank you very much for your input. :)