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Inspiration and Poetry

505 word essay

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Comment from mikemagine
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Thanks so much for sharing this! I cannot disagree with anything you've put forth here. I guess I'm a wimp:-)
Actually, if I had anything negative to say, I'd surely say it. Poets are very special people, I often believe. But at other times I think that that special poetic inspiration finds its way to anyone willing...

Peace!

Mike

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review and comments.
reply by mikemagine on 27-Oct-2014
    You bet!
Comment from Nosha17
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Well written short piece of prose on the theme of inspiration and writing. I agree with most of the things you have mentioned, especially with reference to poetry (obviously because I am a poet) You are right about some people's poetry being too distant, bringing about confusion. I would add to that: it is sometimes so vague that it is incomprehensible. Luckily, people who read my verse all say one of the reasons they like it is because they can understand it. Your prose was well narrated, informative and with good use of descriptive language. Nature is the prime source of my inspiration. Most enjoyable and good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from adewpearl
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That became one of my favorite poems when I was in elementary school - I love your use of it as illustrative example.
Your writing is clear and thoughtfully analytic :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Brooke, thank you for the review and comments. Some of your nature verse reminds of Kilmer :) Faye
Comment from robina1978
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Lovely artwork that complements your story very well. I like how you started explaining how poetry differs from prose. Near the end a nice poem. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi fayesh. Loved this read however, using the piece of poetry seems almost like cheating to me even though it is used as an example. Don't get me wrong the piece is good just would have loved to hear more of your own personality in the write. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from CR Delport
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Not every person is born with the gift of taking an ordinary event or object and turn it into something wonderful and amazing to read. This is very well done and interesting. Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review and comments.