Gratitude
For the best friend anyone could ever have - biographical23 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this biographical tribute to your best friend. I am pleased you have this special ally in a world that sometimes feels quite hostile. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains. Cheers- Joan
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Thank you for sharing this biographical tribute to your best friend. I am pleased you have this special ally in a world that sometimes feels quite hostile. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Dawn, that was a lovely tribute to the man you love. We don't tell them often enough, do we. It is mainly the little things that mean the most that go by unappreciated, yet we do appreciate them, we just 'forget' to tell them. A lovely poem, my friend. xsx Sandra
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Dawn, that was a lovely tribute to the man you love. We don't tell them often enough, do we. It is mainly the little things that mean the most that go by unappreciated, yet we do appreciate them, we just 'forget' to tell them. A lovely poem, my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Prayer and praise are surely the perfect catalyst for an expression of deep gratitude.
To have a friend who is all that you have mentioned is indeed a gift from God.
A lovely dedication -so personal and heartfelt.
Nicely expressed in perfect rhyme as your thoughts flow with clarity and truth.
"-) Shirley
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Prayer and praise are surely the perfect catalyst for an expression of deep gratitude.
To have a friend who is all that you have mentioned is indeed a gift from God.
A lovely dedication -so personal and heartfelt.
Nicely expressed in perfect rhyme as your thoughts flow with clarity and truth.
"-) Shirley
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Grateful and gratitude both wonderful and needed things. You have touched the heart of hearts.
I'm away and computer time is limited. I will be slow to respond and review.
padumachitta
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Hi. Grateful and gratitude both wonderful and needed things. You have touched the heart of hearts.
I'm away and computer time is limited. I will be slow to respond and review.
padumachitta
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
Comment from Writingfundimension
This poem is a really beautiful tribute to your special friend, Dawn. You express so very well the kind of ongoing and selfless love this person has for you. No wonder they have such a place of honor in your life. Hugs, Bev
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This poem is a really beautiful tribute to your special friend, Dawn. You express so very well the kind of ongoing and selfless love this person has for you. No wonder they have such a place of honor in your life. Hugs, Bev
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
Comment from livelylinda
Dawn: oh, that song! Remember driving to work in the late 1960's, that song would come on and I would sing at the top of my lungs. The poem is a marvelous tribute, well spoken and respectful. Very nice writing. livelylinda
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Dawn: oh, that song! Remember driving to work in the late 1960's, that song would come on and I would sing at the top of my lungs. The poem is a marvelous tribute, well spoken and respectful. Very nice writing. livelylinda
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Comforting to have such a devoted and caring friend these days. a lovely poem that lights up the heart of that friend for it is so good to be appreciated.
stunning presentation
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Comforting to have such a devoted and caring friend these days. a lovely poem that lights up the heart of that friend for it is so good to be appreciated.
stunning presentation
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Thank yuo very much.
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming couplets
good use of questions to engage the reader
effective use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
good alliteration and assonance in prayer and praise
a most thoughtful poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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solid rhyming couplets
good use of questions to engage the reader
effective use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
good alliteration and assonance in prayer and praise
a most thoughtful poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Brooke.
Comment from sibhus
A wonderful poem that is so endearing in it's praise of a kind and gentle friend. Great thoughts express in some excellent rhymes that express so well that love and tenderness that a true friend inspires. good stuff there, Dawn.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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A wonderful poem that is so endearing in it's praise of a kind and gentle friend. Great thoughts express in some excellent rhymes that express so well that love and tenderness that a true friend inspires. good stuff there, Dawn.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Many thanks, my friend. (Still having pc trouble - at library now so out of time, but will get back to yu asap.)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is beautifully penned and I am sure your friend was thrilled to receive such a wonderful tribute to your relationship with them. You are really great with these shorter ones as your command of vocabulary comes across in powerful imagery in these shorter forms. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This is beautifully penned and I am sure your friend was thrilled to receive such a wonderful tribute to your relationship with them. You are really great with these shorter ones as your command of vocabulary comes across in powerful imagery in these shorter forms. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
