Comment from Bryana

Excellent

WOW killing the males? It was somewhat
disturbing about the book covers being
made out human skin. I understand the
laws are going to change and no more
killings! I hope so.

Great writing.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thank you, Bryana.

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

I am intrigued about why the male babies are such a bad thing?
But what makes them so worried about modern doctors - is their dna very different?

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you, marijmd. There's a werewolf curse on male infants. Human doctors would know from their blood that they are not human. Humans in that region hear rumors, but have no proof of who are living among them. The werewolf and witches blood would give them away.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Thanks for another great chapter that makes us feel the hatred held between brothers over the killings of the males. This chapter give us a look at the anger growing and the up coming conflict. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you, Ric.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

What great news! No more boys will have to die, but we still have the existing problem. You've done a terrific job with the drama betweeen the two brothers... very believable. :)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you, Phyllis. I know this is not your kind of story and the first part may have disturbed you. I'm so glad you stuck with me and that you like how the story is developing. I'm sorry the first part of River killing his son was such a turn-off, but I had to make the conflict messy so that the solution would be sweet. Thanks again, Phyllis.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Thanks for the character sum-up at the end, that really helped. Nice chapter this one, mainly about wanting to decide the sex of a child.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you, robina. Actually it was about finding a spell to break the curse. And conflict between two werewolf brothers.

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

Chapter 2 of the book Dark Covenant Civil unrest among the wolves "North and South" This is an excellent chapter you have created here. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

thanks.

reply by chasennov on 28-Oct-2014

Okay.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Alright - needs marks before it. I do this all the time when writing my stories and glad when other authors point it out. Good worded write. Story line keeps interest. Good job. Shalom my friend.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you, Ben. I'll fix that.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

THAT IS ROUGH HAVING TO KILL THE BOYS TO KEEP FROM PASSING THE CURSE FROM ONE SON TO HIS OWN SON AND ETC BECAUSE THEY DISOBAYED WHEN THE WERE YOUNG

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

I'm sure what you mean, but thank you.

Comment from Donya Quijote

Excellent

I'm not sure about this chapter. I find the premise of your novel, a mixture of werewolves and witches, interesting. I get the feeling that I am being told a lot. I don't feel any connection to characters. You do have a lot of characters, and thus far none of them seem minor. I could be that I am just tired and not accustomed reading something as dense as this on FS. I don't generally read novels because I am likely to miss chapters due to my schedule, especially if more two chapters are released each day. I just thought you might like to know what I'm thinking and feeling. I'll stick with it for now. Other than these reservations this is written very well....

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thank you.

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Excellent writing, amahra.

I'm sorry to say, the genre is not my thing. I don't care for witches and spells and werewolf's. I know its popular today, but a I feel strongly about reading about sorcerers. Sorry to be a disappointment. I know many others will read your work. I feel badly not reading, on one sense, because you are writing this, but in another sense, I feel like it goes against my beliefs. I hope you understand. I will read anything else you write. Just want to say, your writing was down to perfection. And good luck with your story.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thank you.