Comment from honeytree

Excellent

The art work is interesting for these words.

Life can become so busy doing many things

within our lives, many things can happen within our lives.

honey tree

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Whoa! What a dramatic ending to what I thought was a poem about youth, young love, passion, it ends with the POWERFUL lines:

Shotgun at the ready
Pray sonny pray
Two on the pillow
One in the crib
Love and more lives

This poem left chills!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks again for the stop, glad I touched a nerve, best day you can find.. Walt

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

I have my personal opinion on the subject matter at hand here.. but am afraid to speak it in case I'm wrong. I will keep that part of my review to myself and simply tell you that this really evoked some strong emotions in me.. I thought you wrote it well.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks for the stop, it was just fiction, but a writer can ask for no more than to trigger emotion and thought, best day you can find.. Walt