Reviews from

A Pale Horse

Driving

3 total reviews 
Comment from honeytree
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I loved the art work here and the words written.

Life can have it's ups and downs

we all have our own way when wanting

to do things within our lives.

Great words

honey tree

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

Comment from Veeb
Excellent
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Okay, what I know about 'trucking' you could put in a thimble, however, I got to know what it FEELS like reading this. The monotony, sameness, road weary warrior. I get it - I hear what you are saying. Very good flow, great rhythm, and wonderful imagery! Very well done and a great photo, too!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
    Smile thanks for the stop, best day out there, Walt
Comment from Jay Squires
Excellent
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Well, Walt, you sure captured the feeling of the open road at night. Images like "fly like cinder", "black as coal", "A Hundred and Ten"... all contribute to speed through the darkness.

Of course the dreaminess, the excitement and sadness of love remembered and now gone.

The transitoriness of life in the dark, going fast.

I SO wish I had a 6 for this, Walt.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
    Glad you stopped, just a fun write, thanks, best day you can find, Walt