Monster Who Moved to My Neighborhood
a poem for Nora and Sawyer140 total reviews
Comment from Rubylou
What a fun non-horror poem. He make a wonderfully cute monster.
I love watching young children at Halloween, their antics as well as their choices of costumes.
My favorite line is, " too busy with smiling..."
This is a great poem to share with kids.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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What a fun non-horror poem. He make a wonderfully cute monster.
I love watching young children at Halloween, their antics as well as their choices of costumes.
My favorite line is, " too busy with smiling..."
This is a great poem to share with kids.
Rubylou
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Rubylou, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A ghoul ought to partner with hairy bugs,
not comfort the neighbors in need of hugs -
Our monster loves kindness, which isn't good
for kids who want scares in our neighborhood
a great light-hearted poem, Brooke - that made
me smile and the picture's a real treat. He's
growing fast!!
Margaret
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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A ghoul ought to partner with hairy bugs,
not comfort the neighbors in need of hugs -
Our monster loves kindness, which isn't good
for kids who want scares in our neighborhood
a great light-hearted poem, Brooke - that made
me smile and the picture's a real treat. He's
growing fast!!
Margaret
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Margaret - thank you :-) So glad you enjoyed. Brooke
Comment from kiwigirl2821
My goodness how Sawyer has grown! He is such a charming lad Brooke and of course he isn't the horror of Halloween night! He's much too sweet for that! Loved the story! xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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My goodness how Sawyer has grown! He is such a charming lad Brooke and of course he isn't the horror of Halloween night! He's much too sweet for that! Loved the story! xoxo deborah
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Deborah, thanks so much - :-) Brooke
Comment from Lulube
hey, 2 costumes, not fair, I only had one. lol Good concept for this poem. Sawyer just can't be that scary guy, it just isn't in him. lol The neighborhood will just have to find another. Great poemly story and great rhyming as always.
lulube
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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hey, 2 costumes, not fair, I only had one. lol Good concept for this poem. Sawyer just can't be that scary guy, it just isn't in him. lol The neighborhood will just have to find another. Great poemly story and great rhyming as always.
lulube
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Lulube - my daughter is a bit on overdrive when it comes to clothing her son. LOL :-) Believe me, she and her brother only ever had one. :-) Brooke
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lol Now she can have as many as she wants too. lol Great time of year.
lulube
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Brooke, Thank you for this warm and loving poem. Sawyer is so cute. He looks like he is having a great time. I don't know what Gracie is going to be yet. Thanks for sharing, Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Dear Brooke, Thank you for this warm and loving poem. Sawyer is so cute. He looks like he is having a great time. I don't know what Gracie is going to be yet. Thanks for sharing, Shirley
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Shirley, thanks so much - I'm sure she'll be adorable no matter the costume :-) Brooke
Comment from Jackarrie
I guess you just have to face it Brooke, Sawyer is not up for the job of being scary. He has better qualities. But I am sure he is enjoying playing with his outfit on. He looks the part.
well written
Mary
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I guess you just have to face it Brooke, Sawyer is not up for the job of being scary. He has better qualities. But I am sure he is enjoying playing with his outfit on. He looks the part.
well written
Mary
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Mary, thanks so much. Last year the same thing happened when he was a lion. His roar was not exactly scary LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Treischel
A cute little Halloween poem with the non-monster-like antics of Sawyer humorously expressed. Favorite verse.
No smile puts the "happy" in Halloween,
a time meant for grimacing, grim and mean -
a ghoul's not in business to help me sleep -
if I want a nap I can count some sheep!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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A cute little Halloween poem with the non-monster-like antics of Sawyer humorously expressed. Favorite verse.
No smile puts the "happy" in Halloween,
a time meant for grimacing, grim and mean -
a ghoul's not in business to help me sleep -
if I want a nap I can count some sheep!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Treischel :-) Brooke
Comment from Robin Gilmor
A delight to read and such an enjoyable picture of our boy. A second
costume, oh my! The pressure is on Sawyer. which to wear on Halloween!!?!??
Waiting for the next picture. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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A delight to read and such an enjoyable picture of our boy. A second
costume, oh my! The pressure is on Sawyer. which to wear on Halloween!!?!??
Waiting for the next picture. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Robin, for your thoughtful review :-) He has so many events they attend during October - various parties and parades and pumpkin festivals - so he gets to wear both costumes plenty LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
I like this neon green monster with one big eye. But you're right. He's ruining the reputation of Halloween as a scary night. Love the verbal image of a creature hugging a neighbor.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I like this neon green monster with one big eye. But you're right. He's ruining the reputation of Halloween as a scary night. Love the verbal image of a creature hugging a neighbor.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Spitfire, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from granny goes viral
Oh my goodness. Could this child be any cuter? Yes, I know, you are his grandma. Well, too bad, he is just a happy little green one eyed monster. Poem good too.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Oh my goodness. Could this child be any cuter? Yes, I know, you are his grandma. Well, too bad, he is just a happy little green one eyed monster. Poem good too.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Granny - no, it is not humanly possible to be cuter LOL :-) Brooke
