Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

your few words portray the message well thorns and bees can be double trouble

good visual

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks SC for the the well wishes and cool review.

reply by Smoothiecool on 21-Oct-2014

most welcome..SC >> Faye

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Sorry, mistaken identity,

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You meet the contest requirements wonderfully with this well penned piece. The imagery is vivid and the satori marries well with the ultimate result of interaction with bees and thorns. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks for this cool and lovely review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

great pairing of photo and poem
your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliteration in bees that buzz and internal rhyming in double trouble
a wise warning delivered with a touch of humor :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks Brooke, for the great thorough review.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Thistles and gorse bushes are the worst for prickles. Bees I am not afraid of because they make lovely honey, but wasps, oh no! Well chosen words to convey your message and good complimentary picture. Faye

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thank you Faye for the wonderful review.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the 5/7/5 contest entry. I particularly like your third line. Very clever. Correct syllable count and a good appropriate picture. Good Luck. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thank you Dorothy for the lovely, empathetic review.

Comment from honeytree

Exceptional

I like the art work here for these words.

The words have been written very well

Those thorns can really hurt as well

I loved the words "Ouch Double trouble."

honey tree

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thank you for the outstanding review and stars,

reply by honeytree on 22-Oct-2014

Great writing.

Annie

reply by honeytree on 22-Oct-2014

Great writing

Honeytree

Comment from elizvinod

Excellent

Very nice haiku poem with 5-7-5 syllable. We should be alert in our life about the thorns and bees. But creator will deliver you from all the thorns of your life as you have written in the notes. The only hope is the creator in the thorny experience of life. Good work.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thank you for this lovely, wise review.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

This is a wonderful and very clever entry for this particular competition, says everything it needs tio say in a few well chosen words, good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks Eric for the great review.

reply by Eric1 on 21-Oct-2014

You are most welcome my friend

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Briars, home to blackberries, dewberries, raspberries-all the good stuff. And a grove of pulp pines is otherwise barren. Now my review will save. Excellent five seven five.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thank you for the great review.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is why I don't live in Scotland! LOL It is sad but often true that the sweetest things in life are sometimes surrounded by thorns or protected by a sting. A good subject for your 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Thanks Tony for the great review.