She's Dead You Know...?
A Horror fiction for the contest.3 total reviews
Comment from Brabazon
The story of a plague ravaging Eastern Europe. Rats were the carriers, biting people and infecting them. The irony was, there was food scarcity and humans could only eat the same rats that transmitted the disease.
Story looked fairly ok and would have been better with a conventional narrative style.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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The story of a plague ravaging Eastern Europe. Rats were the carriers, biting people and infecting them. The irony was, there was food scarcity and humans could only eat the same rats that transmitted the disease.
Story looked fairly ok and would have been better with a conventional narrative style.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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Thanks very Much!
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Comment from Jay Squires
I committed myself to reading this from the top to the very bottom, non-critically, in the reviewing sense. I even studied through the first and last part you obviously cut and pasted. That of course was without SPAM since you weren't involved except in cutting and pasting.
When I got to the body of your "horror" story (wait, "story" should be in quotes too), I was neither entertained nor surprised. It was inane, which I'm sure you planned it to be.
I don't know what enjoyment you get out of Fan Story, unless it is to know you've wasted the time of serious, committed people.
So congratulations! Enjoy the rest of your day.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I committed myself to reading this from the top to the very bottom, non-critically, in the reviewing sense. I even studied through the first and last part you obviously cut and pasted. That of course was without SPAM since you weren't involved except in cutting and pasting.
When I got to the body of your "horror" story (wait, "story" should be in quotes too), I was neither entertained nor surprised. It was inane, which I'm sure you planned it to be.
I don't know what enjoyment you get out of Fan Story, unless it is to know you've wasted the time of serious, committed people.
So congratulations! Enjoy the rest of your day.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Well thank you for a review of petty larceny!
I feel robbed. Most would report an idiot like
you but I prefer to block you after a nice review
on one of your top pieces dummy!!!
Never mess with the best!
And, I guess after 350 books written this year, I am!!!
LOL!!
IDIOT!!!!
MOORON!!!
Writing Thief of good material!
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The Better then YOU!!!
Comment from Verdugo Bolivar
Not a very compelling story, There was really nothing to be feared, Vampires against rats does not seem to be that interesting, I understand the plague is the enemy but maybe having an infected werewolf or formitable opponent could give the story some life. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Not a very compelling story, There was really nothing to be feared, Vampires against rats does not seem to be that interesting, I understand the plague is the enemy but maybe having an infected werewolf or formitable opponent could give the story some life. Keep writing.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thanks Gomez for you fine review! Anne Rice is a great writer and the count Lagos was great too! 24
