The divine power of spirituality
contest Spiritual24 total reviews
Comment from Dawny53
I just want to tell you I enjoyed your poem because it was spiritual in my kind of way.. no mention of God or Jesus. I was relieved to see that and so I continued on. Nice work.. I actually felt a bit more calm after reading it! A refreshing change from the typical spiritual poem on this site
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I just want to tell you I enjoyed your poem because it was spiritual in my kind of way.. no mention of God or Jesus. I was relieved to see that and so I continued on. Nice work.. I actually felt a bit more calm after reading it! A refreshing change from the typical spiritual poem on this site
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the great review, I am pleased you are on the same mind as myself about spirituality. Mary
Comment from INtity
I like the image you used for this poem. The meditation and prayer feels so serene in this poem. It is a great impression on entering the spiritual world. Love the train of thought put into this piece.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I like the image you used for this poem. The meditation and prayer feels so serene in this poem. It is a great impression on entering the spiritual world. Love the train of thought put into this piece.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I am pleased you enjoyed this entry Spirituality. Mary
Comment from kwyattman
This is a very well written poem. You have communicated your idea effectively. I have studied New Age thinking extensively and by the nature of it, people have difficulty nailing it down in real language. You have come as close as anyone in capturing the essence of that type of belief system into words that actually have some meaning. Also, you have done that in beautifully written poetry. I will have to see what else Jackarrie has to offer.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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This is a very well written poem. You have communicated your idea effectively. I have studied New Age thinking extensively and by the nature of it, people have difficulty nailing it down in real language. You have come as close as anyone in capturing the essence of that type of belief system into words that actually have some meaning. Also, you have done that in beautifully written poetry. I will have to see what else Jackarrie has to offer.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the wonderful review I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Mary
Comment from tdragonfly
Most all believe in a spirituality whether they realize it or not. We who understand our own spirituality find happiness therein.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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Most all believe in a spirituality whether they realize it or not. We who understand our own spirituality find happiness therein.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014
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Thanks for your understanding review. Mary
Comment from PatVallesMangan
This is a very beautiful poem and evokes the feeling that we get when we are in a Spiritual state. Words like "sublime, " and "serenity" are awesomely descriptive combined with effective rhyme and rhythm. God Bless!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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This is a very beautiful poem and evokes the feeling that we get when we are in a Spiritual state. Words like "sublime, " and "serenity" are awesomely descriptive combined with effective rhyme and rhythm. God Bless!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review, I do appreciate it. Mary
Comment from ravenblack
Yep. That is spirituality for me, drinking in the moment and letting go, communing with nature/the cosmic so that the connection, belonging as part of the all is truly felt. Just one minor fix- natures sound- nature's sound.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Yep. That is spirituality for me, drinking in the moment and letting go, communing with nature/the cosmic so that the connection, belonging as part of the all is truly felt. Just one minor fix- natures sound- nature's sound.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem. thanks for the fix notice. Mary
Comment from Louise Michelle
It is always so hard for me to sit still and meditate. Your poem reflects just how important it is to our peace of mind. This is a good reminder that I should continue trying. Nicely done. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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It is always so hard for me to sit still and meditate. Your poem reflects just how important it is to our peace of mind. This is a good reminder that I should continue trying. Nicely done. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you Louise for a great review, Mary
Comment from ravim
A very simple poem that beautifully rhymes and nicely conveys what spirituality is all about. It's in Nature that you see God, and certainly Nature holds all the mysteries of the Universe. "Ruminate the joys and sorrows" was a top ending. I really enjoyed the poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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A very simple poem that beautifully rhymes and nicely conveys what spirituality is all about. It's in Nature that you see God, and certainly Nature holds all the mysteries of the Universe. "Ruminate the joys and sorrows" was a top ending. I really enjoyed the poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thanks for your review, I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Mary
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A lovely poem in three good stanzas for the Spiritual writing prompt. Good rhyme in abab form. I puzzled over the use of 'sidereal time' not sure what you meant, but good use of metaphor in that line. Lovely display, both in picture and choice of font. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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A lovely poem in three good stanzas for the Spiritual writing prompt. Good rhyme in abab form. I puzzled over the use of 'sidereal time' not sure what you meant, but good use of metaphor in that line. Lovely display, both in picture and choice of font. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you Dorothy, sidereal time is star time without clocks I did put that in my notes. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Eric1
This is a wonderful inspiring and uplifting entry for this spiritual competition my friend, great use of imagery and description, I wish you good luck my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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This is a wonderful inspiring and uplifting entry for this spiritual competition my friend, great use of imagery and description, I wish you good luck my friend.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thanks Eric for the great review.
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You are most welcome Mary
